PLEASE DON'T KEEP THE SUSPENSE ANY LONGER, YOU'RE KILLIN' ME!
Great story but "Please Guevera can we have some more?"

Please tell me you are going to be continuing this story? It has me intrigued :)

great story keep it up can't wait to see what happens next

Oh come on...was that really necessary? A cliffhanger? Oh man...

Okay, this is most definitely very much killing me...I hope more is coming sooner than later, cause this is so intriguing.

More! I'm love'n it.

More Please! *Gets on knees* I BEG YOU!

hmm, interesting. Very similar to a fic I have in mind called Uprising, where John is missing and Elizabeth returns to Earth pregnant. You'll have to read it when it is posted. Anyways, I liked it. I thought it was very well written and I hope you continue.

Ooh, one stroppy child eh? Great story. It almost sounded like Tory was channeling John when she was stood at the door talking to Elizabeth?

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :)

I normally don't read fics pertaining to Shep/Weir relationships but this one caught my eye. I was pleasantly surprised. Now I can't wait for the next installment in what appears to be a very captivating story!

Great job! Look forward to more. Thanks for posting!

OMG that is so sad... i really hope you continue to write the story!

Lexa

My theory...Tory (nice name by the way :p) is John's reincarnation of sorts. Of course, I could be totally wronge here...then again it's just a theory.

Very nice story, I'm hoping the next chapter is coming soon?