aww, so sad

Wow, this is very sad. Short, but powerful.

I'm sorry but That wasn't very good; story wise anyway.
The way you wrote it was good, but not the plot.

poor batman.

poor Cat u killed her man

good fic

i liked it. you really capturd the feeling of the characters. boy, you are one of the best writers on fanfictions i've seen in a while. i dont usually read romance stories but this one is really good. 8/10

ps added you to fav. author's list.

I liked it.

Mispellings, just a few.

It has potiental. It's good. I just might have focused more on the emotions.

Me, I'm a closeted fan, no one that knows me knows I like this stuff.

The bat is dead :( man you handle these characters wonderfuly. Great job. Hope there are more BTAS fics coming.

wholie cow that just insain!

I finally checked out your profile and saw this listed! Yes, I can be a little slow at times. :-)

"He didn’t move. What was wrong with him? I couldn’t understand why he didn’t slap his infamous bat-cuffs on me. I mean, this had to be a trap. I touched him and he was getting cold. I kissed him and he wasn’t breathing."

Great one shot. It captured so much using so few words.

I am not a big fan of the first person narrative, but it really works in this. It was very powerful and so easy to identify with Catwoman's feelings, from the thrill of the chase to the incomprehensible - that Batman was dead.

Me gusta. I think that's the only girl I'll ever be happy with Batman dating. Just like Nightwing and Batgirl belong together, so do Batman and Catwoman. I think there is a law? I'm pretty sure there should be.

Let me tell you, in the next Batman movie she had better be included. I freaked out in Batman Begins when she wasn't the love interest.

I enjoyed this, even if the ending was a tad bit depressing. Depressing is good though, makes for a lasting impression. For your first fanfiction (well, maybe it's not your first) this is awesome. If this is your first fanfiction I just might have to die. My first fanfiction was he said, she said, and nobody exclaimed - or did much else for that matter.

Keep writing, I'll keep my eye out for more Batman: TAS fanfictions. I'm a sucker for them.

-Cas