That was a great story. The writing was very good, and I like the way you cultivated the plot. The characters were all very genuine, and I think you set up a sequel quite nicely.

I love this story. You should make a revised adition of this.

cool

Andrea I have a ? Are u planning to do a revisied version of this story?t

interesting

cool story

I think it's great story. But I wonder: when Anakin fall in love with Padme, he was Jedi Padawan,right? And after the little wedding on Naboo, he come to the Temple back, am I right? He had yet his Padawan's braid, right?

He knew Jedi Code, but he loved her, he can't live without her, yes, yes, but... what with lies? I think Knighting was some ceremony.I think about some oaths, about braid's cutting etc. etc. If it was, oath - Anakin lied to everybody. Obi Wan and Jedi Council. He knew he lied - and he did it. He become Knight because they think he deserve for it, but he deserve'nt. For example: Tusken's village.

I don't know. Anakin was'nt sincere and lied...

But this is very goodwrited story and nothing change it. I like Padme's influence for Anakin in Your story...

Cool idea and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading the plot.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest. I just wanted to say how I like the idea Master Yoda is changing his thoughts. Jedi SHOULD be allowed to marry! You have quite an imagination and are a good author. Other than a few minor grammar errors, this is a great story!

great story can't wait for the sequel.

great story

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Worse is understating it, there's just no way of describing just how bad things would have been (or originally were).

I think this is a truly great fic! I'm sad that so many people died, but I guess that it had to be this way. Still, this is one awesome fic. Congrats.

Great fic! I'm going to be onto the sequel soon! I've just reviewed your Forever Destined Vignette- I'm not sure what I'll do once I'm done with all your fics!

I loved this idea, and really like the way you've changed the characters. I could scarcely believe that this was your first Star Wars fic- it's great! I can see where you've developed in your writing style too, though.

Once again, I can't wait for your next work!

This is definitely one of my favorite Anakin/Padme stories. Just one thing though, it should be MARTIAL law, not MARSHAL law. Please change it and it'll be perfect. Thanks

love this story so wish it has actually happened this way. Great writting very well told and thought out