nice

*rocks back and forth in corner, hugging knees to chest, eyes twitching* What are you saying? *twitchtwitch* Of course dragons are real! *twitch*

wow that's beautiful

who does tenten marry?

I have always believed that Tenten loves dragon. She always strikes me as a dragon; strong flexible beautiful free.

So...who was the father? Great story! :D Was the part where Kakashi destroyed the source of the dragons from an actual episode or movie or something? I like this story quiet a bit. :)

In Christ,

Timber Wolf

That's beautiful.

This gave me some very interesting thoughts, I like stories that make me think :)

A pleasure to read. Nicely done grabs you and keeps you till the end. :)

beautiful

I liked it! I love the endding the best, you should mack this in to a story. that would be so cool! and the fact on who the father realy is. hafe dragon? keep up the good work. please!

Impressive! you should mabye do more like this?

Very well written, I like the whole Dragon thing. 5/5

my god. that was amazing.

coolio! ;)

This was very good. Although I can't help but wonder who's the father of Ryuu.

job!

lilchibihina