I loved this one shot, but a word of warning... sucks and they may delete this adorable oneshot because of the lyrics. If i were you I would go back and delete the lyrics... trust me, it happened to a bunch of my stories... Very clever little story!

[Ohmygosh]
- - - I
Adore this!
I luff RisaxSato.
And I luff you
[&& This]
You're so absoltely
b r i l l i a n t...
[wow]

Kurumi is breathless.
You a b s o l u t e l y rock.
So
[inyouhonor]
I wrote you a litte
s o m e t h i n g.

Check it out. Its:
[D a n d e l i o n]
Just for Paopu.
&&Paopu only.
Suck a
genius.

- - - -Kurumi
[luffs]
y o u.

m u f f i n ,

I read this a while ago.
I never got to review though.
[heart] I found it quite cute.
Yeahyeah, I'm not really familiar
with DNAngel and whatnot,
but whatever. [nyahh]
Dreams are very, very wacky...
[nodnod] But they're, like, fun.

L i k e .. yeah.

Write more.[demand]
q u e n c h - MY - t h i r s t .

[italics] Teehee.

` xoxo mitsukaii. [bianca]

Is this ur first DN Angel fanfic (I 've just read ur profile :D)
The song...It's cute. I love it. Ah, I will send it to my friend, today is her birthday.>__

Aww, it was all just a dream? Dam. Oh well, nicely done. And a lovely rhetorical question at the end that makes me hope "oh there is more!" then bam, hopes dashed with the words "one-shot" I am foiled again. Basically I loved it, and the song was a cute choice, it fit right in with the mood. Your descriptions were very wonderful, that is what pulled me in (that and i love DN Angel^^) Oh, i have noticed intrigue. You labeled it as chapter one, not complete. Hmm perhaps a whole bunch of one shots?? that would be nice. ;) well, off i go to make other writers happy with long winded reviews of only praise, for that is what they all (and especially you!!) deserve. Loved it.