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| mj0621 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abusenice fic...I'm glad they turned out alright...*sniff* gotta love MS! |
| ibreak4CSI 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseYou do a wonderful job of keeping Mac and Stella in-character, while still managing to write great stories with them. I really liked this fic; the way Mac chased after her until she finally let him in. And I love the touch of humor at the end. Great job! |
| Rxc 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuse^_^ I like it alot. Good job, keep up the great work! xD |
| Gomes 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat work! A wonderful premise of chase, and I love that he finally caught up to her. Really well expressed, and the dialogue was brilliant in it really being a vehicle to express Stella's fears and Mac's reassurances in relation to those. Excellent tag line on the end - perfect touch of comedy. Thanks for sharing this. |
| marginalia 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abusecyclone2 said exactly what i would have said. keep writing. |
| Cyclone2 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's gems like this that make wading through all the crap on FF worthwhile. I don't know how you managed to write all the hurt, fear, hope and desire that Mac and Stella felt and still keep them in character, but you did. You did an amazing job with characterisation. You did an amazing job, full stop. |
| Laura 2006-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh I loved it! It was so touching! You know I wish they would be together! It is so heart wrenching to see them as they are *sigh*.. TV is not what it's cracked up to be is it?? I hope to write a fan fiction some time when I'm not so busy! Life can be so full of uncertainty but then for some people it's laid out right in front of them... Thankyou for letting me read your story! *waves* Laura |
| Tinker Bell 05 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseA beautiful… ** tragedy- My FAVORITE line. The ending fit beautifully and I always like it when I end up laughing at the end of a story. I like the hesitation from Stella at the beginning but it was nice to watch her open up to him towards the end. I could picture this whole story in my head as i was reading it. Great job and thanks for thanking me. Hehe. |
| JennCorinthos 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAmazing, I loved it... JENNIFER |
| AliasCSINYFriendsER 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseARGH. I don't like it when really, really, REALLY great Mac & Stella fics are one-parters. We all love Mac & Stella, don't we? LOL So why not have longer stories? hehehe I'm not mad at you or anything. Your story was just so BEAUTIFUL and perfect that I couldn't help but bring it up! I LOVED THIS! So if you're going to do one-parters, can you write some more? I'd LOVE to read more. hehehe LOVED IT! ~mandi *_* |
| Long Tianshi 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, your story pulled me right along with it. It was amazingly easy to envision - no doubt due to your great writing style and story pacing! Excellent Work :) Thanks for sharing. |
| Muzzy-Olorea 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet. The way Stella reacted was so in character and I love how Mac didn't give up on her. Fantastic stuff. |
| Lu78 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseReally liked it. Can just see Mac and Stella acting like that. |
| fruitbat00 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWOW Bl**dy wonderfull. Great tension very well paced you are pulled along with Mac as he tries to catch Stella tries to talk to her to understand. I was scared for a moment that she was going to keep runing from Mac. Also love the tag line for the story it adds to the tension the feeling that she may walk out or that this will end badly. So glad it didnt. |
| Steeldust-01 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseWonderful as usual. I'm glad that in the end they made it all up ! Great little story. |