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| kelticsgirl 2007-01-31 ch 16,  | abuseread it love it. |
| panthersrock08 2006-09-21 ch 16, | abusehey i liked the story it was awsome. |
| sandersfox 2006-09-09 ch 15, | abusei love this story so much it is a clasic favorite of mine |
| Shika.Tot 2006-08-27 ch 16, | abuseAw I loved it! It was awesome and original! I couldn't stop reading. Great job. |
| sandersfox 2006-08-10 ch 16, | abusei really liked it. you are the kind of writeer i want to be! |
| toetagged 2006-04-11 ch 16, anon. | abusewow...we definately need some more brass fics from you...that was awesome! |
| BEWhiteDragon-00 2006-03-03 ch 16, | abuseThis story was indeed very interesting and good. It would make a pretty interesting episode. Keep it up |
| Gib 2006-03-01 ch 16, | abuseNice wrap up to a very good story. A few typos throughout the story, but hey English is my first language and I haven't written anything in English or otherwise. Great job! I read the story in one sitting and every question I had at the end of each chapter was answered in the next. The pace and content of the story was good and kept me glued to the computer and up reading way past my bedtime. :-) I especially liked the way you incorporated all of the characters into the story. Brass is my favorite so I was especially pleased to see that he had a major part. Keep up the good work. I'll check out some of your other stories later. Again, great job! -Gib- |
| Gib 2006-03-01 ch 15, | abuseSo the bad guy is officially revealed to Brass. Love the way Brass is trying to put doubt into the bad guy's head. Seems as though it's working a bit. Bummed that the next chapter is the last. Great job! -Gib- |
| Gib 2006-02-28 ch 14, | abuseI can feel the showdown coming. The rest of the gang has reunited which means trouble for the bad guy. Curious as to what he's been up to for the past few chapters. Great job! On to 15. -Gib- |
| Gib 2006-02-28 ch 13, | abuseGood chapter. Thank goodness they finally got Kevin under control. Nick and Grissom have been put through the ringer. The way I figure it, is that Brass didn't want anyone else getting hurt, that's why he took off to go get the bad guy. On to 14. -Gib- |
| Gib 2006-02-28 ch 12, | abusePoor Brass, having to relive his past and sharing it with Nick and Grissom. At least the lights are on. At least I think, it's a good thing. Warrick and Catherine interrogating the kid was great, made me smile. Grissom's got to be crazy trying to look non threatening to a drugged out cop with a gun. What was he thinking! Only 4 more chapters left? I don't want it to end. -Gib- |
| Gib 2006-02-28 ch 11, | abuseJenkins, the unlikely hero. Loved it. Warrick doing commando is too fun. Catherine getting fed up with the situation and doing her own commando stealth thing was great. So they've got one bad guy in custody, and Kevin is freaking out. The suspense is great! On to 12. -Gib- |
| Gib 2006-02-28 ch 10, | abuseYay, at least part of the gang is together. Wonder who sprung Sara. I think I know but at this point I'm not sticking to anything. Still wondering what was on the card. Off to ch. 11. -Gib- |
| Gib 2006-02-28 ch 9, | abuseGood for Grissom, killing the camera's. Brass is like a pit bull when he gets angry. I hope Kevin will be alright. I can see Warrick getting frustrated at their situation and just going for broke. Good job. On to ch 10. I'm on the verge of reading this entire thing in one sitting. I'm loving every chapter. -Gib- |