This is so good! You've captured their characters very well, I hope there's more!!

My, my. Please update soon.

This is an incredible story so far I hope you will continue it soon.

This chapter is very beautiful. I like the way you handle the relationship between these two characters. Very nice work!

Woh, i havent seen an update for this story for a while. i hgad to reread, but i like it even more now. this chapter was really good. keep it up and make more, ill be waiting

Storm

This is great! I really hope that you write more to this, your writing style is very intersting and you get the characters just right. I find the dreams to be really interesting.

please write more. ^_^ There are so few good WuFei/Sally fanfics. heck, there are few of any, let alone good ones!

Ukky

O! THIS IS SO GOD! Please, I'm begging you! Please post more sooN! Thank you so much!

Very interesting. You have a great start with this story; I can't wait until you update!

great story please update more

Poor Sally, I hope she'll be okay! Good chapter. I liked the dream, too. Well written and intriguing and just...very cool! Keep it up!

Oh, interesting so far. I can't wait for another update. Hurry! ^_^

Storm

Real good, please continue. It shows real good signs of prospect

Great start! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Excellent; I'm not a big Sally/Wufei fan, but this was great. Well, almost all great. You do NOT shoot scorpions with shotguns. Aside from nitpicky things about scorpions wandering toward people and being out in the middle of the day, the blast could very easily have hit Wufei. Scorpion venom is unlikely to kill you. Hitting an artery is quite likely to do so.