this 1 is good 2

I personally like GrayOc's and this was no exception. The only problem I had was with the thing about the BDaBattle and the anchor. You see I am also a long-time fan of Yu-Gi-Oh and I know that that senario sounded strangely like when Yugi dueled Joey in Battle City. Joey was being controlled by Marik and Yugi had to duel him to free him. It was exactly the same, from the key in the boxes to how Allison saving Gray. In the show, it was Joey's sister Serenity who saved him but the plot certainly didn't change. That leads me to believe that you took that part from Yu-Gi-Oh.

me again lol _ i really like this story!

i guess gray is ur fave character lol!

hes mine too! hes hot lol!

hope u write other stories1 plz keep in mind wot i have

said in ur other stories!

luv from

x babe300 x