Excellent!

Aw... Sob. Lovely job!! *hugs* Our oro-chan is just oo caring at times. Lol. Im glad though. =)

Ari chan

One of the sweetest fics I've ever read. It was so well-written as well! I loved it, :)

I am in awe, honestly, I'm so utterly speechless (without words) after reading this piece. This was so incredibly wonderful. I'm sorry if I cant give a more constructive review. Sometimes, being faced with greatness leaves you like that, stunned and overwhelmed with emotions you can't think of anything else to say. I simply love this fic. Your writing is eloquent, simple, flawless yet the depth of emotion behind its simplicity made it haunting and unforgettable. I know it's been years since your last updates, but I still hope you continue on your writing. A talent like yours make readers feel connected, it deserves to be read and praised. Thank you. =D

This was really cute! Loved it!

woah~ kenshin is really very loveble jerk! hahaha! I really love him! waaii~~ hahaha! really nice fic! Hope you do more kk in the future!! good job!

Oh gosh, that was such an amazing story. I love that the characters are in character, the emotions and the reactions they all have. Amazing! :)

aww, how sweet! you captured their relationship so well with just a few words. congratulations on a great job!

Sniff. That was really well written. It was... perfect. Meep!

Kirei. Just like the pearl comb.

This is beautifully written. You did a great job.

This is really beautiful. I love the repetition of form in the statement at the beginning of each segment. It creates a really wonderful cadence for the story. And it's so sweet! Just lovely.

AW i like this its now on my favorites

Oh that was just plain wonderful. I love subtlety, and you exploit it to the its pure beauty. I'm inspired now, thanks to you.

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^_^ That was great! Usually I'm inclined to dislike things written in present progressive, but this was excellent. I liked how you had the merchent stealing the comb back, it sounded very canon to me, perhaps something that would have happened if there were more volumes of RuroKen. In fact, the whole thing was very canon. I also liked the line about Kenshin not thinking she is weak because he his stronger, that just struck a chord with me. Anyway, nice oneshot, it was amazing.

Twilight Rurouni