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liza
2009-03-14 . chapter 9
i love this fic! i so can relate
Jace Cam
2009-01-15 . chapter 11
Ah...
Such a nice ending!
I love it...
It's so nice I feel like crying T.T
Man do I wish I can make something like this...
Well anyways.
This was really nice to read since I've been a little down in the dumps lately.
Oh and I really do love that quote that you put up in the story a few times
"It’s hard to fall in love with your best friend… You never thought that you will feel like that… But as time passes and memories struck you, you’ll just realize… that the best friend you considered for a long time; was the person you’ve been waiting for… all your life." -torn pieces

I have no clue if you made it or not but if you did...
You deserve props which is what I'm giving you haha.
Oh yeah, I make my own stories but don't post them up on here since it's for "Fanfics". So yeah I was wondering if I could use your quote sometime if I gain your permission.
>.<
So yeah,
hopefully you will finish -For You I will-
I am dying to know what will happen...
Well then
Salamat Po!

-Yeah I'm Filipino too-
little lira
2007-11-22 . chapter 11
hahaha.
it's a wonderful story.
hahaha.
i love it specially when ryoma executed his plan 4 kei and naru.
hahaha.
"ka2kilig"
i hope you can finish the last chapters for for you i will very soon.hahaha.
ill just compare a,i love 4 you i will more than dis..
hahaha.
but still,,this story is beautiful too.
hehehe.
little lira
2007-11-21 . chapter 6
It’s okay… D-Did you miss me?” she asked.
“Of course I did! You just don’t know how sad it feels to be far from my best friend… I missed you so much Naru. It felt like hell living without you, and now that I’m with you again, I would never leave you again. Never…” he said while looking deeply into her eyes.
“I missed you too… so much Keitaro. I was waiting for you all day, there in our promise river. Every minute that passes by without you, just feels like hell too, and now… I wish that we would be together, and I wish it would be for forever…” She said and then hugged him.
They hugged for a few minutes, without saying anything…

hahaha.
ka2kilig.
hahaha.
aion.
waah..
kei-kun is a jealous type huh.
haahahah.
little lira
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
uhm..its okay,,beautiful..
hahaha..
uhm...but i dont read the song part..
hahaha...i have to do other stuffs eh,,
so i make it quick..
and im not supposed to read this one..
too lazy to read..
hahaha...
i wonder where you get these thoughts and i wonder who inspires you..hahaha..
uhm..quite.."bitin"
hahaha..
=P
im excited to the nxt story..hahaha..
uhm..wat ba mgandang review??
uhm...
the story is too short..
well,,1 chapter ln yata yan eh,,ayt??
uhm..
geh2..
aian na,,mei review nkoh..
hahaha..
mwah,,
love yah empee,,
idol..
hahaha..=P
Thowell3
2007-07-20 . chapter 10
Maybe have like what happens in a couple of years after this last chapter. Or something like that.
As Time Passes By
2007-06-03 . chapter 9
Good chapter. Though I wish there was more story to read on, it's a good development so far. I get the feeling that Kei and Naru will hold out on their feelings for a while. Keep up the good work.
As Time Passes By
2007-04-22 . chapter 8
Very good chapter torn. I have a feeling that the green-eyed monster will turn out to be Naru, but that's just me. Anyways keep up with the good work.
Shattered Blossoms
2007-04-07 . chapter 7
yeah... it's hard 2 fall in love w ur bstfrend...
Jennon-Donnon
2007-03-15 . chapter 7
Yes, I like it. More, please?

Konting ayos dito at doon lang ang kulang. Galingan mo pa, ha?

Ganbatte!
gem
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
wui. ganda! ang hlig mo naman sa term n" she walked and walked. She didn't even mind where she going to." pag upset ung tao plging ganun sinusulat m, la bng bgo??

HEHE!!

lng personalan ha.

sarap plang mang away noh, hehe.

bka magreklamo k na nman ha, sbhin mo, dpat eng. hrap kc eh. bayaan m ung d makaintindi.

bye...
gem
2007-01-13 . chapter 2
hi! this chapter is exciting but sad.ha!! i hope you wil add more chapters, until 30? hehe. joke. keep it up...
GEM
2007-01-12 . chapter 1
yan nahanap ko rn to'ng review na to'!! yan n nag review n koh ah! tanungin mo nga kung bkt review twag, pde namang comment o kya message, review p. ang layo... un lng...

GUE TC,


R
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C ON!
K
As Time Passes By
2007-01-10 . chapter 7
Great chapter 7
animeboy-12
2006-10-26 . chapter 5
r u a filipino cause im also one but im from canada...saan mo ba napanood yung love hina?...cause i watch it here as a dvd...keep it up.
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