|Reviews for Unwanted Fate|
| Samhan 9/12/10 . chapter 11
I like it
| ReaderOfAwesomeStories 8/13/10 . chapter 11
i was sort of depressed about the ending of Love hina (The real series) but i read this, loving every chapter, then i finished reading this, now this, this... is a true lesson for people to know, for a happy ending story unlike any other, for a good thing to read. now everytime i start to think of the series or of how much my life is like this story (up to chapter 5) i just remember this story. And unknowingly a smile spreads across my face. it's like the whole story was my auto-biogriphy, but it's just so much better, all i can say is "good job!".
| ReaderOfAwesomeStories 8/13/10 . chapter 7
This story is the best one i have read on here!
| ReaderOfAwesomeStories 8/13/10 . chapter 5
Everything after the end of the flashback in chapter 5 was completely true! I know from experience, and it's all true touching, and hard to deal/strugle with.
| liza 3/14/09 . chapter 9
i love this fic! i so can relate
| Jace Cam 1/15/09 . chapter 11
Such a nice ending!
I love it...
It's so nice I feel like crying T.T
Man do I wish I can make something like this...
This was really nice to read since I've been a little down in the dumps lately.
Oh and I really do love that quote that you put up in the story a few times
"It’s hard to fall in love with your best friend… You never thought that you will feel like that… But as time passes and memories struck you, you’ll just realize… that the best friend you considered for a long time; was the person you’ve been waiting for… all your life." -torn pieces
I have no clue if you made it or not but if you did...
You deserve props which is what I'm giving you haha.
Oh yeah, I make my own stories but don't post them up on here since it's for "Fanfics". So yeah I was wondering if I could use your quote sometime if I gain your permission.
hopefully you will finish -For You I will-
I am dying to know what will happen...
-Yeah I'm Filipino too-
| little lira 11/22/07 . chapter 11
it's a wonderful story.
i love it specially when ryoma executed his plan 4 kei and naru.
i hope you can finish the last chapters for for you i will very .
ill just compare a,i love 4 you i will more than dis..
but still,,this story is beautiful too.
| little lira 11/21/07 . chapter 6
It’s okay… D-Did you miss me?” she asked.
“Of course I did! You just don’t know how sad it feels to be far from my best friend… I missed you so much Naru. It felt like hell living without you, and now that I’m with you again, I would never leave you again. Never…” he said while looking deeply into her eyes.
“I missed you too… so much Keitaro. I was waiting for you all day, there in our promise river. Every minute that passes by without you, just feels like hell too, and now… I wish that we would be together, and I wish it would be for forever…” She said and then hugged him.
They hugged for a few minutes, without saying anything…
kei-kun is a jealous type huh.
| little lira 11/13/07 . chapter 1
uhm...but i dont read the song part..
hahaha...i have to do other stuffs eh,,
so i make it quick..
and im not supposed to read this one..
too lazy to read..
i wonder where you get these thoughts and i wonder who inspires you..hahaha..
im excited to the nxt story..hahaha..
uhm..wat ba mgandang review?
the story is too short..
well,,1 chapter ln yata yan eh,,ayt?
aian na,,mei review nkoh..
love yah empee,,
| Thowell3 7/20/07 . chapter 10
Maybe have like what happens in a couple of years after this last chapter. Or something like that.
| As Time Passes By 6/3/07 . chapter 9
Good chapter. Though I wish there was more story to read on, it's a good development so far. I get the feeling that Kei and Naru will hold out on their feelings for a while. Keep up the good work.
| As Time Passes By 4/22/07 . chapter 8
Very good chapter torn. I have a feeling that the green-eyed monster will turn out to be Naru, but that's just me. Anyways keep up with the good work.
| Shattered Blossoms 4/7/07 . chapter 7
yeah... it's hard 2 fall in love w ur bstfrend...
| Jennon-Donnon 3/15/07 . chapter 7
Yes, I like it. More, please?
Konting ayos dito at doon lang ang kulang. Galingan mo pa, ha?
| gem 1/15/07 . chapter 3
wui. ganda! ang hlig mo naman sa term n" she walked and walked. She didn't even mind where she going to." pag upset ung tao plging ganun sinusulat m, la bng bgo?
lng personalan ha.
sarap plang mang away noh, hehe.
bka magreklamo k na nman ha, sbhin mo, dpat eng. hrap kc eh. bayaan m ung d makaintindi.