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sakurayamato1
2009-11-24 . chapter 6
hey xDeanax :)
your story is really good i love it, but were is the next part i going to died if don't read the next part jejeje well maybe i'm a little dramatic, but i really love your story
i hope i can read the nest part soon
good luck :)
Meyrin-x-ZAFTgirl
2009-10-18 . chapter 4
OMFG. I died laughing...I especially love the Yza bits. So funny. You have him completely in character. This should be listed under humour.

My family is staring at me. I'm snickering for apparently no reason.
Cassrynne
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
That was funny. Interesting story. :)
Emina04Sakura
2008-09-28 . chapter 4
w0h0oo~!!
Athrun is realizing something..XD

oh,..
p0or Yzak,..f0r having an idiotic brainless friend.
p0or Milly..f0r having a suitor who was born without a brain.

hahahaha. XD
Emina04Sakura
2008-09-27 . chapter 3
Wohoo~!!

ELTHMAN, YOU MORON, I’M ALLERGIC TO FLOWERS!
-Wahahahaha. p0or Dearka~!!
Wahahahaha =D

Athrun cracked his brains for some idea--ANY idea! After some high-speed brain blasting, he finally cooked up a plan that would have made Dearka proud.

True, it was desperate. It was insane. It might even get him murdered.

- just as I thought..XD
Emina04Sakura
2008-09-27 . chapter 2
well..too late n0w..=P

Hahahaha,.Dearka is s0 ann0ying~!!
hahaha,..XD XD XD

Cagalli is so brutal~!!
wahahaha,.XD
Emina04Sakura
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
Wahahahaha~!!

Po0r Cagalli,..XD
XD
XD
XD
summer
2008-04-28 . chapter 6
man u havent updated this in a while...
thats makes me sad..
please update!
cagallirockz
2008-03-25 . chapter 6
ha this story is so funny!i want to read more about them falling for each other:)
ultrabookworm
2008-02-25 . chapter 6
OMG! lol please update this story is too good;P
pinkberry
2008-01-02 . chapter 6
sad... :( you haven't updated this for about a year! Why? are you still planning to continue it? I know you're still out there visting ffnet haha I know it because i see the flag in your profile was activated... it's one indication that the user is still active. I just want to know why you stop writing... it's really sad seeing that your stories, not to mention the best here in gseed section, are left hanging. haha you know what if i only have your talent i won't go bugging you here... i'll write my own but too bad i don't have such skill- haha i can't even write witty conversations such as these.

So please continue...
i'll be waiting :)

pinkberry ü
f.s.mercredi
2007-12-15 . chapter 1
you know i've been waiting for you to continue this story for ages! no kidding! when will you do a follow up?!
Lackadaisycal
2007-07-18 . chapter 6
LOL! OMG! That was jokes about Cagalli's feet! Ah poor Nicol! Update soon! I'm dying to read another chapter! I really really really really love this story! Great writing styles, great plot! Its one of the best fics I've ever read! I love how it has humor! Hehe, I love it! I can keep ranting on and on and on on how much I love this fic but that would annoy you. =p Hehe, So i'll stop here. Update son please!
cagalli
2007-07-11 . chapter 6
athrunxcagalli forever
shiloah18
2007-06-28 . chapter 6
uhm.. what's with the guy steaLing CagaLLi's cLothes? never heard of something Like that.. reaLLy new.. ^^

NAKED?! don't teLL me CagaLLi didn't wear underwear under those bLouse and skirts.. O_O

now Athrun, seeing CagaLLi naked in the changing roOm.. couLd she pose with you on the next issue of PLayBoy magazine? *giggLes*

say, I Love french fries! my fave finger foOd! XD

man, Athrun.. just admit it that you're faLLing for her! the same goes for you CagaLLi! *grins*

suteki going with the bodyguard thingy.. in GSD, Athrun was the bodyguard and CagaLLi was the so-important-person.. demo, in this fic.. it goes the other way around..

Athrun, you couLdn't defend yourseLf? tsk.. tsk..

just reaLized that bLondes, YuLa and ELsman, in this fic seemed to be the one bLowing up the kitchens.. lol XD

ei, how come not compLete CagaLLi's name? CagaLLi YuLa Athha.. 'coz you Left it hanging as CagaLLi YuLa.. was it to kEep her identity as a heiresS to a miLLion doLLar company?

Kira and CagaLLi, they're twins in this, ne? then, who are their parents? gomen.. I kEep on asking this question over and over again with other authors.. it's just that I want to know.. why.. so.. is it ULen and Via Hibiki? Haruma and Caridad Yamato? or.. Uzumi Nara Athha with an OC as an okaa-san? or did you mixed them?

hmm.. Kira and Athrun aren't shinyus in this fic..

uhm.. Athrun.. how come you didn't noticed what CagaLLi said.. "..goOd LoOking corpse.." weLL, nvm the corpse.. just think about the "goOd LoOking" part.. *giggLes*

suteki! damseL in shinning armor and knight in distresS..
lol XD *rofL*

AmaLfi.. "SEe no eviL. Hear no eviL. Speak no eviL."
man, you are so yeLLow minded! lol XD *Laughing my head oFf here*

nyWeiZ, kakoii deshou fic! ^.~
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