I haven't been able to read this because I had no computer. Then when I finally check back, you had updated! I have never cried more for a story in my life. It was written well, and it felt so real. You did wonderful with this story. I'm glad I read it.

I'd say that classifying this as a JV is far to limiting, considering the fact that what you have presented us with is a damn fine example of a full, meaningful Wild ARMs tale. It may not be what some would call epic, but it incorporates most of what makes the series, the world, and the characters what they are.

I remember how, whenever I'd read a new chapter before going off to do whatever it was I was doing that day, it would affect me for the rest of the day. I spent many days at work depressed. For reasons aside from the norm, anyway. I also noticed that I'm not the only one. This has been so powerful and so...real, that some have been unable to finish because of the sheer impact.

This wasn't a mere pairing fic, is what I'm saying. This is a TRUE fanfic. This IS Wild ARMs 3. And it is an honest to god honor to recieve it.

How do you like them apples, huh? _

Outspoken? Reaches of an olive sunset, understanding the brief glimpses of wandering scents in choked dole.

That was wonderfully thought out! I appreciated the plot you placed because most fanfictions these days tend to be cliched a thousand times over, and not that profoundly written either . I hardly write any fanfiction now, but my own poetry and stories. Aside from spelling errors and what not, you captured the character of the wild arms cast well. Great job! D

How could you dare to kill Jet Enduro! This is competely a new way of romance, for me. I like it, but in some way i hate you for killing Jet...oh forget it, this was a great fanfic

That was really good, and very sad... But it ended perfectly. So Jet will continue wandering... how it's meant to be.

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... Blubbering again, sense will return in a moment. -shakes head-. 'Kay, I'm done crying.. not. Anyway, I wanted to review these last chapters together because, well, it seemed to be the right thing to do. Firstly, ma'am, you made me cry. Over Jet. And I don't like Jet. Yes, you're that damn last chapters, though sad, were wonderfully written and kept so in character, even as Jet was dying, very well written. Sometimes death can feel so empty and yet so fulfilling, an end in a beginning, a death for life.. It reminded me that life is but a fragment of eternity and that we should all live it to its greatest extent. Death be not proud but humble' amor vincit omnia... Rest in peace, Jet, may the planes of far be blessed and the memories be many.

You know i found this chapter pretentious, and actually i don't like that ones. Even, i waited for a chapter like this a long time, specially from you!

Anyway, I love this chapter!

That was actually pretty good. So what's next? The conclusion? I suppose so. Well, hurry it up, anyhow.

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Ooh, oh damn it, I'm crying like a baby. Man, this chapter is so great; it's sweet, sorrowful, and above all deep and beautiful. Sometimes what you want to say is so far from your lips although it's close to your heart. Ma'am, you blow me away and have moved me to tears. Excellent chapter, full of surprises and love... now to stop boo-hooing. :

I liek the first chapter w In the game, I always thought that Jet and Virginia should be together...they look so cute when they argue w

"The worst thing that an adult will ever witness in their life is when a child dies young. All they can do is wish that it were themselves instead."

"But when a child dies young, they remain young forever. It's immortality. It's what everybody wishes for."

That's my favourite quote throughout the story. That was just... so sweet...

I think you did Clive's character extremely well; he was caring whilst being articulate, funny and serious, all of these emotions are very well done. I shared Jet's surprise of Clive smoking, it really is a shocker.. I was even more surprised to learn that Clive was afraid of death. Then again, I don't think I blame him... aye. At any rate, another wonderfully written chapter, full of insight and passion. Two (thousand) thumbs up. :3

You did a good job with the chapter, but, honestly, the Gallows one was a bit more powerful. I'm thinking, though, that the next one will be thre greatest of all three.

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I think you've helped me make up my mind. Thank you.

By the way, you're my hero.

Yay,another chapter! And as sad as the last one. Actually, this one hit me a little more. And I think you wrote Clive perfectly. They both had a weakness, and a strong point.

I am really liking this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!