write more theifshipping?XD

A very interesting story!

The first thing I must say is that I absolutely love the first two lines- they just sound so much like Malik to me. And I'm quite amused by the way he blames the 'delusions' on caffeine, which comepelled me to do some research. What, was caffeine the only psychoactive drug he could think of to realistically blame it on? I don't think it even induces open or closed eye visuals ;)

I really love the chemistry between Bakura and Malik- it's just as I've always thought of it, an exchange of arrogant fronts and insults.

My only real nitpick at the moment is the detail of Bakura's eyes. In both the anime and the few color images I've seen of him from the manga he was shown as having purple eyes, not that different to Malik's in fact.

And I can't say I'm fond of the Visionshipping here- there are too few hints for me to get a real feel of them as a couple. But that's also partially my own issue- incapable of including a side ship without exploring it within and inch of its life ^^;

Lastly, the little hints concerning the nature of Touzoku Bakura here are interesting. Canon certainly leaves things rather open-ended cocerning his possession and the mechanics of it, and this is a plausible phenomena given the evidence in the last arc.

I agree. They do need more love!

XD

That was the best one YET! You even did the intimate moment with class. That was really superb!!

Amazing story ! Continue writing !

... *wants* Write more, please? ;; WE ALL MISS YOUR WRITING. D8

After reading this story, I straight away fell in love with Citronshipping XD


I love it! *thumbsup* I hope you can write more of this :D


EXCELLENT!

This story is SO cool! I love this pairing!

The story was wonderful. I loved the way you described how Bakura was standing in the darkness. It was very interesting! I will read more stories written by you.

I absolutely loved it. I don't have any constructive criticism, because I think it's just great the way it is and you should keep writing like this! I had to read it over and over again =D

The last sentence was excellent, though it may have been more effective if Malik had convinced himself it was all a dream before he found the bracelet. Still, that's nitpicky. I really enjoyed this!

I like this, and I think you got the characters quite well done. I hope there will be more to this I know it says it's complete but it would be good to continue, and like you said yourself "This pairing needs more love, damnit." :D :D

dun dUN DUN! You know, this might be the first of your other fics huh?

I understand the others know... You know this SOO reminds me of this Tendershipping fic, Ryou was in denial and it was an all around ecercise of/in a "mind-F#$@" as I like to call them. Its called "Numb" by lark lavroc.

WOOT! HOT! Please write more!

This is an amazing story! Please update as soon as you can!

P.S. Bakura liked it too...