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| Cutiepie2191 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Keep up the good work:) |
| Nana56 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseWell done. I'm glad to see this aspect explored. I know it's ridiculous the way the heroes on tv get seriously hurt and just get up as if nothing had happened. I suppose it's a time thing and we're left to fill in the blanks. You've done that very nicely. Thanks. |
| angel679 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat story loved it. I always love the missing scene stories no matter how many ive read. |
| The-NightWalking-DayDreamer 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseWOW!! THAT WAS AWESOME!! Although I think Dean would remember but would hide it but thats just me and my obsession lol :D This one shot was awesome and I REALLY loved it!! THAT WAS SOO COOL!! I LOVED LOVED IT!! YOU ARE AWESOME!! YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!! GREAT JOB! |
| Zenamydog 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseYour right, heaps have been written on this subject, but,hey you did one hell of a good job! Kept me interested! :) |
| Katie 452 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abuseyes - the asylum fics were done to death but i love them! This ones no different. I enjoyed it a lot. Great job! |
| Moon-Raver 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abuseOne of the better post-Asylum fics I've read, truer to character. A drunk Dean is a happy Dean methinks. ^_^ |
| ashlyns 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseI love the little talk...even if dean is totally wasted and cant remember a thing later. lol. |
| Sydney 2006-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere is one S in focused and I believe you meant button down shirt not button up. These are the type of grammatical and spelling errors that make stories unreadable. Please proofread better. |
| shamelessOne 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAll I have to say is I loved it. Mainly the beginning after Sam went into their room, leaving Dean at the car, and then he just let it all.. 'go'. I don't really know what to say, it's too good. But the ending with Sam watchin' over Dean and everythin' reminded me of the song by Death Cab for Cutie, 'Brothers on a Hotel Bed' for some reason xD |
| Ghostwriter 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseVery cool. Catch ya on the flip side |
| zippdipp 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI totally love this. Just how I imagen it might have gone down.. but one little thing... "The great thing about rocksalt was that it didn’t have the strength to penetrate bone or muscle" Rock salt can cause some serious damage. Penetrate muscle? Oh yeah. People have actually died from being shot by rocksalt y'know. Just thought I'd let you know. Most people are not aware of that which is a shame. (I'm not accusing you, just people who load their weapons with rocksalt and don't think it'll cause any serious harm) xx |
| ChaiGrl 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED that you had the removeal of the rock salt in your story! I have always thought about how that went and nobody else has written about it. I was very excited to see that you took that head on. Keep up the fantastic writing! I can't wait until you update your piece. Until then, Happy Writing. |
| LdyAnne 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseLOL Dean had to be drunk before he'd discuss the touchy feely stuff? Too funny! And probably pretty accurate. Cute story, I wondered about the rock salt and it's ramifications! I haven't seen a lot of Post-Asylum fics, but I don't hang out in any of the Supernatural places. Thanks for sharing this with us!! |