Truly beautiful

Very good story! You should wright more BM Fics :)
~ToXiC~ x

Wow! I really did not know where this was going. You really touched me and surprised me with this short piece. Good job, lovely descriptions.! My story is
Thank you.

you made me cry. =(

in a good way, though.

Beautifully written and scarringly haunting.

You captured such emotion and really made nature come alive to paint vivid and beautiful pictures of the scenery that plays such a huge part in the film. Ennis came alive, and so did the mountain.

This has to be one of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read. Your narrative voice manages to be both simplistic and strikingly eloquent and graceful, with an unrivalled flow of prose that reminds me of wind.

It's such a contrast to the oft-repeated line that you use so effectively. That line comes out sort of strangled and awkward, and reminds us that words are never enough.

I loved it. What more can I say?

Katy

Oh my god! I'm crying...that was so well-written...Thank you!!

Holy crap. Beautiful... So beautiful. Crying.

Beautifully written. I just saw the movie today and your short story was perfect.

Thank you so much. I'm much obliged and I thank you. What a completely sweet ending to the story we all know and love.

I'm new here and I look forward to reading your stuff.

thank you, again.

peace...dov

Well **.

That was ** beautiful, absolutely brilliant.

What a beautiful, moving way to put closure on this story.

Got this little lump in the back of my throat but I refuse to let the tears fall.
Good job.

I loved this story so so much. It touched me. It was so beautiful. So different. It made me cry. Thankyou so much for writing this story.

Beautifully written, wonderfully done. All around, this is a perfect piece. I applaud you.

-Ashley

i saw the movie, but haven't yet read the book. i loved what you did with this story though, i could actually picture it being real, like an extended part of the movie. great job.