OMG is she ok i like keep updating

Aw I really liked this story. There was just one thing that was kinda bothering me. Goku souned like he was from down south lol. The storyline is great. I'll be waiting for more!

Oh no, I didn't review!?!?!?

I love where this is going, please update soon. I'm not even a hige Goten fan myself, cute as he may be, and I'm loving this! Update soon please! Summer is here, I know you can do it Ames!

ANNA

Yay! :D I'm really glad that you decided to keep going on this one, I was wondering what was gonna happen to these two. :3 I loved the running joke about the cooties, Goten was so cute with how concerned he was about them. I loved that he took Trunk's word over his fathers regarding cooties for quite a while, that is so like a little kid. x3 Very cute chapter, I look forward to more!

...and I had no idea that you had a forum!! D: I must go check it out!

yea, keep it up!
goten is practically my favorite character!
well done! :)

Keep it up. It has my attenion.

~TheHolyDarkness Out~

poor goten!! she's not dead is she he's just going to give her a senzu bean and she'll all better right!?!
DON'T KEEP ME WAITING!PLEASE!
i love goten stories (and gohan he's my favorite)don't let her be dead!
NEED MORE!

Aw, poor Goten! Wow, I usually don't have much love for any DBZ character other than Piccolo, but you've made me really interested in Goten--and I like the fact that he's not paired with Marron or Bra for once. Great job keeping everyone in character, especially Trunks. I don't know much about Goten, but I know that I can definitely see young Trunks doing and saying all that you wrote, you did a great job! I look forward to the next chapter. :3

Oh poor new girl! I never figured you'd write about an OC! Are you a Mary-Sue now 0_0;; Just kidding I loved this! Cookies for your efforts! Oh one thing when you said “That was too easy.” He said. “This stupid tournament is a waist of time.” I think you ment waste HA I corrected your supiror grammer and spelling skills!

i like the summery for this fic. i can kinda reflect on it. its not really a good thing though -.-U
WOW i'm reading a fic without piccolo in! thats a HUGE step for me :D

That is really...cute. Honestly, I didn't know how I would like a Goten/OC romance but this is turning out quite nicely. But he's only ten, so there certainly isn't MUCH of any romantic interest yet. Clair is a pretty name though, isn't she Goten's wife in "Twilight's Embrace"? It's the same name isn't it?

Not many typos here, just some minors. One in the A/N...you have trouble remembering "their" is refers to people and "there" refers to places or things. Keep it in mind next time, otherwise it was pretty good. Not perfect, but deffinately interesting. Could have used a little more discription for the other fighters, but that's just me.
Anna

I liked it for the most part. ^.^ The descriptions were slightly vague but I think you got better nearer the end. At first I thought it'd be all insta-sappy but I think you'll do all right.