Awe that was a sweet first kiss scene. Keep it up.

So I thought this was pretty good except ... you kind of tend to switch between present and past tense. Otherwise, I thought it was pretty good - a good idea for a story.

And just as a random coment, Deborah Harris?! I almost laughed because I immediately though Debbie Harry. Lead singer of Blondie. :]

=] this made me smile all happy like.

I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. That was great, you have to update quick, I can't wait to read more. :D
:P

Boss story. It was good. Sincerely.

~Bull Shark

This is really good. I hope you add more.

~Bull Shark

hey goof, im printing your story cuz i love you!

Wow, I really liked it. I hope you write more soon!

Wow, this is a really good story. This actually was the first SBM fan fic I've ever read. The movie has been my favorite for a while, and the novella by Stephen King one of my favs, but I've been a little hesitant to venture out of Harry Potter fan fics until now. This isn't a One Shot is it? There will be more right? Update soon.

WOW this is great, I really really loved it and I can't wait for you to update this...

xKTx

Good story, hoope you write more soon!!