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| RikkuDevil 2008-07-04 ch 7,  | abusegood story so far keep writtn tho lol lookin forward 2 tha next chapter :D dont keep us waitn 2 long |
| shewolf51 2007-07-18 ch 7, | abuseThis is an amazingly entertaining fic and I can't wait until you update it, I hope it's soon. |
| XxDawnxRiderxX 2007-07-08 ch 7, | abuseplz finish this! its really good! |
| PooPeeePie 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh this is a cool story Hope you contine :) |
| dantegirl84 2006-10-16 ch 6, | abuseThis seems very interesting. Keep writing :) |
| dantegirl84 2006-09-24 ch 4, | abuseI really like this story :) Vergil and Lady are just so sweet pair :) |
| Bettany 2006-09-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseWow this story is so excellent. I love Vergil and Lady stories and this one is so adventurous and fun to read. |
| MOONLIGHT SHADOW HUNTRESS 2006-09-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseINTERESTING I LOVE THE VIRGIL AND LADY PARING. CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT |
| avalonaroony 2006-07-06 ch 7, | abuseGreat story. Your very good at keeping everyone in character. Update soon! |
| Ki Ki 2006-06-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseI am curious about karabou beef jerky! It's funny to see Lady's being crazy about weapons :) Vergil should know better that his girl doesn't like to be protected. Guess he's only ever slow at picking up what women are thinking? |
| Ki Ki 2006-06-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseI'd imagine Lady would like to play with weapons and try them out like you how described her. The fight between Lady and Shirena is nice and detailed. Seems like you put quite a bit of effort into it and it paid off. I'm just a bit confused at the end. Is the woman who had the soothing voice and talking to Lady is her own reflection? |
| Ki Ki 2006-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseHow obsessed is Arkham to tell stories about Eva and Trish to his little girl? For some reason I think he might have been a good person until he discovered about the dark arts.The part how Lady was very innocent when she was a child was finely described. |
| Ki Ki 2006-06-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseThe way you describe how much Vergil regreted not being able to save his mother was nice. Lady's pretty good at fighting and thinking about the past at the same time. I have to say I can't. |
| Ki Ki 2006-06-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseI haven't read fanfiction for so long! Gotta get back the rhythm. Anyway, another good chapter this is. I think the conversations between characters are good because they shape the characters. Sometimes I think you can leave out some though. |
| Vylet Lust 2006-06-12 ch 7, | abuseWow! This fanfic is still going great and thanks for continuing it. These are some amazing chapters, yo, including this one, too. Nice work! I love it and keep it up! Update soon! ~p.k. |