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| angietheunicorn 2008-01-05 ch 2,  | abuseit's not horrible writing. it's actually well written. i could say, who learned you how to wrote, but i just typed it, no speaking involded, highfive, and keep practicing, may your fingers always me aglie enough to write, angie the unicorn |
| Gabzalabza 2007-10-13 ch 2, | abuseHey! are u gonna finish this story? I'd like u to. I'm wonderin how ur gonna explain the DN mind-speech. C'mon! keep writing! |
| Emily 2007-08-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseO. I'm getting to really like this story please send an e-mail if you're ever @ loss for ideas although i'm sure you won't be. This is a great story although i was a bis confused at the start 'cause i wasn't quite sure what was hapening. i'm sure you already know this but try not to uuse the same adjectives too many times. I suggest using a thesaurus. Anyway, great story! |
| Ally 2006-12-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat story i like it. I was just reading the first couple of lines on chapter one and it got me thinking. In ROTG, it does say in the prologue that Numair realises something that 'erased even his sense of magical cataclysm'. Was that realisation that he loved Daine? I was never really sure. Anyone who is reading this review if u can, can u please reply? Sorry im just really curious. |
| NecromanceRayne 2006-09-02 ch 2, | abuseplease will you write an other chapt. |
| Phoenix Fanatic 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abusehehe that would be terrible, having someone reasding your thoughts. Update soon! |
| Harmony'sSake 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abuseI love it! Its so cute and... fluffy! lol Keep it up! ~HS |
| DT 2006-08-25 ch 2, anon. | abusei like it, but shouldn't it be Tyran not Tyrainian? and did it ever say that Numair was Tyran in the books? i can't remember. |
| tora.of.the.sand 2006-08-24 ch 2, | abuseSWEET! luv it! cant wait till you update again! and your writing isnt crappy, mine is, lol! i have two stories of my own and if you have the chance can you r&r both of them sometime? |
| Harmony'sSake 2006-08-07 ch 3, | abuseAW! That story is soo cute! Please update! If you still need plot ideas PM me! |
| tora.of.the.sand 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseTkka is spelled like this just to tell u. I LUV UR STORY! IT ROCKS!! |
| namaste95 2006-05-07 ch 3, | abuseWow! Can't wait for more. More fluff to be exact! Keep Writing! |
| arianna99 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseGood story. I just finally had to write a review, because i keep on klicking on here, sand then i realize, oh wait, ive doon that a million times alredy.. |
| beaaautifull 2006-02-20 ch 3, | abusehahaa i love the only for you part! ahh what tiem you going to practice do we have to be there at 12? stiince we student directorsS?!~| EMAIL ME BACKK! |
| hubba.0.bubba 2006-02-20 ch 3, | abuseYey fluff fluff FLUFF! UPDATE! |