I love this story and where you are taking it. It is refreshing to see that Harry has a backbone and is intelligent enough to see that he was being manipulated by the old coot, and that he was smart enough to do something behind the old coots back to get out from under his manipulations. I would love to read more and to find out how this ends.

Harry gave the goblin a feral grin. "Yes!" he hissed.
"If your eyes begin to turn red, I'm gone," Ron stated warily as he stared at his best friend.
Harry's shoulders slump glumly. He turned and smacked his friend. "Why do you have to ruin the moment?"

*grins*

"No, whatever you're thinking, no! There will no flinging yourself off the castle tower, there will be no trying to ride the unicorns, and there will be no forcing a love potion on Mrs. Norris so that she would fall in love with Fang. I still have that scar, thank you very much. There will be no painting Snape's office pink with yellow polka dots just because you liked some song and you wanted to see if you could. Snape terrorized us for weeks over that because you couldn't stop grinning. He knew it was you. You couldn't even lie to him without grinning," Ron said to a pouting Harry.

-

Dobby looked at the still figure, satisfied.
Dobby turned and looked at the fascinated and shocked Potions Master. "Dobby enjoyed that."
-

*laughs near-hysterically*

Good story, although a few to many easy solutions. Please continue

Ron and Harry digust me, with their puerile bullying of the goblins at Gringotts. Do you think they are being witty?

This is such a great story! Please, Please, Please Update soon! It's rare to find such a GOOD and DETAILED Azkaban!Harry story.
Update soon!
Usagi

You know, I read this story a long while ago. Not on fanfiction.not but some other place. And this morning, when I lay in bed wondering "what should I do today?" I began wondering "what happened to that story?" So I sat down with my computer and searched on google after "Flames of Betrayal", and become annoyed when it came up with a account, since last time I read it, there was no "marietsy" on . I rolled my eyes and thought"Well, whatever, I'll just read and see what it says." Imagine my surprise when it was the story I was looking for! And now, I am VERY happy, because now I won't need to check upon the story every once in a while to see if it has been updated. It makes it so much easier to be me! So, thank you for bothering writing it, publishing it and then re-publish it. Ey, may I ask a question? Why is it that in almost all the Betrayed!Harry/Azkaban!Harry fic's out there it's almost always either Hagrid or Ginny(or both of them) whom Harry has 'killed'? Wouldn't it be much more original if he 'killed' someone else, like Lupin,Molly, Hermoine or Dumbledore?
Well, whatever, your story not mine. So, all in all, I thank whatever God(s) was involved in creating you for creating you.
'Cause you make stories worth reading. Thank you!

I am hoping that you just have a severe case of writers block instead of abandoning this story... because its brilliant! Please say you will finish it!

OK, it's been more than 2 years since you last updated this story (and indeed, any other story). There are several things I would like to point out about this story:
- Why did you have to kill Ginny? She was the perfect girl for Harry, and I wager that she would have been as great for the anti-Dumbledore cause as Ron was.
- Also, there is a failure in the continuity of this story: first, William Potter clearly mentions that the line of the Potters is the line of the Gryffindors as well, but later (in fact, at the end of this chapter) you say that neither Harry nor Ron aren't the descendants of the Founders, which contradicts William Potter's statement.

Otherwise, good story. And hoping that you'll wake up and actually finish your stories.

sadly the last chapter so far, I hope more are to come.
Poor DD losing control *g*
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you comment... hm you already named Harry as a decendent of Gryffindor while Fakes bonded to him so he is a decendet of a founder.

Nice chapter and I'm still confused about Moody

Nice meeting, even if I fear that the Madeye there could be DD with polyjuice

UHH shame on you for killing poor Neville and I am courious what happens in the meeting

Good thing that Gaia agrees with Harry and good you plan to bring Luna and Neville into the fold

Sweet that Harry can still surprise Snape and good to see Tonks again