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Gepetto
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseWOOH hahahahaha!

Just thought I'd actually review a story you wrote for once, and I couldn't come up with anything better than a maniacal laugh.
Mr.Pantzzz
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abuseoh, ure good at writting this stuff...
Squiggles.Candi
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseWow, my review was just deleted. I'm going to kill someone.

Anyways, I'll try to rewrite it:

Hee, awesome idea! Have you already started this fanfic, I wonder. I'm excited though, I love the Tallest, which is possibly why my favourite episode is Backseat Drivers from Among The Stars. Zim, Dib, the Tallest, and some great scenes with GIR, all in one episode! Glee!

Just a heads up, I laid awake all night waiting for inspiration to strike me down. Finally, as my CD ended and dawn crept up on me, I was furiously scrawling some unreadable mess with a blotching blue pen. Just posted the second (and deffinately last, don't you dare ask for another) chapter to Good Luck Squee! Yay! And this time, it's longer -proud of self for bothering to listen to somebody and take their advice-

Bleh, I've almost read all your stories, haven't I? Hm. Well, only one solution.. Go start another! Right now! I've read a few Invader ZIM fanfics, and although quite a few of them are good, a lot of them are.. well.. Blick.

I'm hearing odd flapping noises coming from a corner in my room. My paranoid and sleep deprived mind tells me it's a giant moth. Scalp is crawling just thinking about it. Again, awesome oneshot here, I shall await the actual fanfic (the Red Tallest as always been my favourite, the Purple has always seemed weak to me).
Dlbn
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was good. Poor Purple, he really seemed scared...but they got what was coming to them, i guess. YAY! Justice prevails for once in a fic! Good job!
^_^
Dlbn
Loren
2007-03-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm gonna review as I read. Ok, here I go!

TRENCHCOAT! HOLY SHIT! Kidding.
Lard Nar?! YES!
o... go Dibby!
poor Purple...
DIE RED! DIE! *cough*
My momma just came home. WHOOPA!! She's taking a nap so I can keep in reading! YAY!
DAMN YOU! WHAT IS BLACK HEART?!?!?! was it mentioned in I Am the Enemy? I don't remember it! GAH!
TallestCora
2007-02-20
ch 1,
abuse*Laughs* This was really funny! But I've always imagined the Irkens as a happy, fun-loving people, you know, as in, the kind that they don't care about you, but they'll sure have a lot of fun with it in the meantime!

And, with that in mind, in the meantime,

PASS ME THE CORNIES!
Shadow Wasserson
2006-04-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI wonder... does 'Black Heart' have anything to do with Black Holes?

And I know that this would have made less drama, but couldn't they have searched Red's PAK for memories of anything they needed to know?
hitokiri youkai
2006-04-17
ch 1,
abuseLove your fics! Keep it up
BishoujoTenshi
2006-04-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseOne word: Amazing. This is great. You should made a sequel about what happens after the trial and during the Resisty's lives after the Galactic War.
~*PeaceOut*~
HeCallsMeHisChild
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abuseOh wow, that's creepy... and very well written. Convincing! Oh, *shudders* Can't wait to find out what this Black Heart is. Poor Purple.
Marie-sama
2006-01-15
ch 1,
abuse*shudders* that was creepy.I look forward to reading more of your fics.
nemzit
2006-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really enjoyed this story, and look forward to reading more. The whole war trial is a very interesting concept. Perhaps you could have lengthened it by documenting the demise of the Tallest rather than just summerising it? Still, it works very well. Just get somebody to proof-read it and yeh, it'd be fantastic.
Sanoon
2006-01-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, this was pretty good. Very good.
AnimeFreak84 and Ikemen
2006-01-11
ch 1,
abuseWhoa...

That was cool and pretty dramatic! I agree with flying metal child that Red's comment sounded like Saddam Hussain's, but it's okay. And poor Pur! I didn't want him to die! No!

Anyway, me likey! Do more some time!
Rethtales
2006-01-11
ch 1,
abuseHm. I like much.

Some things:
From your portrayal of Purple, I wouldn't think he'd have the courage to commit suicide. It seems more likely that he would be murdered by a guard or another prisoner, and then they'd try to cover it up by saying he killed himself.
If you're gonna use acronyms like IDS and TSP, please captialize! Makes it so much easier to figure out.
Aswitz seems like a bit too obvious of a name for a character of his kind. Maybe something that doesn't scream NAZI DEATH CAMP METAPHOR would work better?

That's all the critique I have right now. Hope it helps.
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