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Reviews For: Where Has My Heart Gone

Naomi Friesen
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abusei enjoyed it =D
Kelsey Estel the TolkieNarn...
2006-01-23
ch 1,
abuseThis was so sad! I cried!
Nebu
2006-01-09
ch 1,
abuseThis rocked. I was really upset when I read the ending and It didn't say anything about her. Thank you for writing this.
Capegio
2006-01-09
ch 1,
abuseI'll have to take a look at that song. Watch out for conventions - you're missing apostrophes for the posessive forms of some of these words, and you have a few Arbitrary Capitalizations. Also, it's Edmund, not Edmond. Good basic idea, work on expressing it more clearly.
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