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| Naomi Friesen 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed it =D |
| Kelsey Estel the TolkieNarn... 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was so sad! I cried! |
| Nebu 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThis rocked. I was really upset when I read the ending and It didn't say anything about her. Thank you for writing this. |
| Capegio 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI'll have to take a look at that song. Watch out for conventions - you're missing apostrophes for the posessive forms of some of these words, and you have a few Arbitrary Capitalizations. Also, it's Edmund, not Edmond. Good basic idea, work on expressing it more clearly. |