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| Sara Wolfe 2007-01-01 ch 1,  | abuseThat was great. And Booth probably would have believed about the mind-blowing sex, if only to become immediately jealous of the fictional guy involved. |
| TangerineBreeze 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseI like it! The writing style is really intruiging... And hilarious. Keep writing! |
| SlaYeRGiRLkaL 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was so... I don't know but I liked it it would have been funny if she had told him she was tired because of mind-blowing sex |
| Tez 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI think this story is well-written and very true to Brennan's character...although I kind of wish she'd told him about the mind-blowing sex :) |
| CrossoverQueen 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was REALLY funny. "You're tempted to tell him you're tired because of mind-blowing sex." Priceless. This actually flowed quite well, especially since it's in second-person; second-person is one of the trickiest things to write aside from present tense. And you got Booth and Brennan's characters down very well. I'm glad this was the first fic I've read in the Bones fandom. These sorts of fics are always the best first fics to read. |
| Fanwoman 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseInsomnia sucks. This is a great day-in-the-life piece. Thank you. |
| Arianna Malone 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseNice! I really got a feel of Temperance as a multi-dimensional character...unlike the tv episodes which sometimes fail at that. |
| life is a safety pin 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abusesweet, love it, please update soon... love the mind blowing sex line... |
| mercurybard 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseNice. Well-written and the second person manages not to be abnoxious (quite a feat, I know). Poor Bones, though I almost wish she had told Booth the lie. I kinda wanted to see the look on his face. |
| Kippling Croft 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abusegood story. |
| dry14000 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abusei like this story. it's good. |
| Erkith 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuselol depends if her ex was in town :p a bit short, but it was interesting... I like how she considers and dicards options like some ppl do clothes... |
| jezziebeth 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI believe I read this at livejournal, yes? Don't remember posting a review though. I like your writing style in the second person, a POV that many authors struggle with. Excellent story. |
| XxAnimeChick 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic! |