YAY randomeness!u should write more like this with sonc amy sad inu kagome yugi and pharoh! it would be so funny! and RAMDOM! yay!

well it was confusing
but highly amusing
oh im talking in ryme
does anyone here have the time?

lol original idea man i loved it

Thats one crazy story you made there hehe.You made my friends laugh til theyre faces were blue(and me of course)

LOVE YOUR STORY!^-^

lol XD,, jejeje that was god, as in, gee that was funny :P but seriously that was nice to be your first one although i would have never thought of putting all those characters together well it certainly worked out for you anyway i really liked so keep on writing, youre good and i would like to see you post more fics heh now im going for this is the longest review ive ever written hope you like it see ya (probably tomorrow lol but who cares?? O.o?)

It's cool, for your first fiction.