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| Megan Consoer 2007-12-02 ch 4,  | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| izadora15 2007-11-20 ch 4, | abusei hope that yuo can post a new chapter soon i like this story and i whamt to read what happens |
| kiko91 2007-11-20 ch 4, | abuseyeah, another chappy! i love when sessy is all nice and half naked! sexy sexy sexy! |
| TheRYU 2007-10-14 ch 3, | abuseare u gonna update this story anytime soon?i hope so its good ^_^ |
| AMI MIZUNO1 2007-07-10 ch 3, | abusethis story has potential, though spelling and grammatical errors detract from the plot. Even if you and your teammates can't spell, there's always spell check on Microsoft Word and the dictionary...yes, that heavy text next to you...USE THEM. FYI it's Kikyo..second chapter it would be better worded "I'm no ones"...'gunna'? nay, change the 'u' to an 'o' and you'd have it. If spell check doesn't work for you, think about getting a beta reader...preferably someone who isn't afraid to speak their mind and tell you when something doesn't make sense and that you need to elaborate more in a certain area because it's too vague. Beta reader should also have spell check installed...If you are going to continue this story and are looking for a beta for it, I'd be willing...anywho, hope this isn't a lost story... |
| Neptune-Saturn 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abusewh 'cries' no... 'sniff' |
| Neptune-Saturn 2007-06-11 ch 2, | abusenice chp Kit...hope u update soon... |
| Megan Consoer 2007-01-18 ch 3, | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| Punk Dog Demoness 2006-08-24 ch 3, | abusemmk hope you can update soon. |
| the silver falcon 2006-08-24 ch 3, | abuseamazing beginging |
| Puppyeye1 2006-08-24 ch 3, | abuseok |
| mimi86 2006-07-24 ch 2, | abuse-whines- wheres the next chapter... |
| bookluver101 2006-07-17 ch 2, | abusei like it please update soon |
| raspberrysorbet 2006-07-14 ch 2, | abuseI shall give you a suggestion for the summary.Only a SUGGESTION.Its up to you ^_^ Kagome finds Inuyasha and Kikyo in a certain POSITION when she returns from her time and realizes she's begun changing...in certain ways that involve a certain demon lord...etc,etc. |
| MidnightKitsuneInuAshurii 2006-07-13 ch 2, | abuseLol!! Great story ^^ update soon...or i'll suck my irrisitably kawaii puppy after you...^^ |