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| SeaBreeze 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusewow... that was so painful to read, in a good way. Even though Atton never glossed over the facts of his past its easy to look beyond them and not realize the gravity of what he did - torture someone. Your story definitely adds serious dimension to his character. Wow, I really want to try my own version of this. What I loved the most was that I found Deesse really irritating, and despite the fact that I didn't like her she still did a great and noble thing - you gave her depth, too. Kudos. |
| Anarchy's Ashes 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseVery good.I liked it. Good look at darkside without it becmoing too dark itself. On another note entirely, is Jaq the official name given to Atton's past self? I've finished the game four or so times and I can't ever find it. humph |
| xLintux 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseMwuhaha. Aww... Atton. Bless him. Fantastic writing, as usual ^^ Alyia got all jealous for a moment then xD |
| Rattler3 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseanother fantasticly written one shot. Very smooth, and I could see it occuring just like that. but how about that Savior Self *cough* /grin |
| DarthNexus9000 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseGood story. |
| Sagebeth 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI actually really enjoy the way you write Atton - i'd like to see some more actually scenes with a possible romance between him and the exile from you. It'd be neat! |