Well, I certainly didn't expect the last chapter to be about dealing of whenever to conquer the world or staying on the good line, but I liked it, specially for the way you put it. Ron saved the entire world just by being himself. Good old Ronnie ^^

Now, regarding the KiGo side, I must say. I know the urges and all, but shouldn't Shego give Kim more time? I mean, only on the third date and sex already? Even nowadays when sex ISN'T a taboo, it requires some trust, some intimacy, and I really don't think Kim and Shego had that yet. Clearly they got a lot better for the background explaining what they had before the final fight, but at the intro of this chapter I felt like it was forcing it a bit.

Still so, nice ending. Seems like the couples will now have plenty of time to enjoy themselves, and now that I've finished this one, I can move to some of your other works too ^.^

So, sooner or later there’ll be more reviews of me. See ya in them, buddy. And congratulations, you must be one of the few people having their FANFICS turned into books! XD

And here I thought the KiGo side was already concluded. Silly me ^^U. Oh, well, looks like the next chapter is going to be full of action for both pairings, I guess.

Aside from the homosexual factor, which you excel on dealing with in your stories (That’s it, besides for this story’s “Everyone woke up gay” factor (We talked about it before)), this fic introduces this element of a young man dating another man, or heck, a young person dating a person old enough to be his/her parent. So I really like it how the aspect of “guidance” came up, Drakken decided to not get involved because he was NOT Ron’s father, but Ron brought it up again because he needed someone experienced to help him where his parents wouldn’t. And well, what kind of boyfriend would Drakken be if he didn’t? ^^ So yeah, you can tell I really liked that from this chapter.

Oh, and another thing I loved was the reason you stated for Kim liking Shego (and same with Ron for Drakken, in a way). That… was really unique, or at least I haven’t seen it done before.

So… well, I can’t help but to wonder how will this end, hopefully with HLS (XD), but well, just gotta see it for myself! ^_^ I also want to thank you because I feel this story has been giving me a good ideas for “Heaven in Hell”, the fanfic I’m working now (Basic premise: Young woman used to date older woman. A year later, the older woman’s daughter decides to face her feelings and confesses her mother’s ex-girlfriend that she loves her and… let’s welcome chaos ^^)

See ya around, Jack. Take care

Dunno what to think about the fact that the sex scene here was more explicit than what I could remember from you, but I know of a couple of girls who'd love to read this one chapter (If they knew English, that's it).

Overall, a step forward to the relationship, I guess, though this still doesn't tell me whenever things are gonna get better or not. The tension is still there and it was there during sex, so... well, still two more chapters to go. Just got to get to read them.

Oh, and I almost forgot: The whole chapter had so much sexual innuedo in its quotes that the actual sex seemed a bit eclipsed! XD

Er... whatever. See ya in next review ^^U

It's gonna be a cold day in hell when I learn to do things AT TIME, but even so I'm not one to leave thing half-assed, so here you got me.

So, I kinda suppose this chapter concludes the KiGo sideplot, letting the road free for whatever Ron and Drakken still got to deal with. You actually seem to like to deal with the in/out closet stuff, and Kim's part in this story sure resolves around that. I kinda expected her day at school to have a more... scandalous reaction, everyone acting as if it was no big except for Kim kinda gets way too seen at this point of the story, but... whatever. It was kinda fun anyway.

And was the Demantia thing a reference to our friend at the Slash Haven? Or is there something you both based on and I don't know about? ^^U Y'know, just curious.

Well, I wanna wrap this up and see the end of it for once and for all, and maybe then I can go after some other of your stories (I heard pretty good things about "Accidental Mistress", actually). So, see ya in next review. ^^

I never thought this pairing could work. Evil Mad Scientist in his forties and teenage boy hero? It's wrong, but you made it work. Hell, you made it sing. Everyone stays in character, but there's much more built on them.

The only thing I wasn't so sure about was Monique, who practically says "Oh, yeah, I'm a lesbian dominatrix and Middleton is a hotbed of sapphic loving." Where did that come from? But I'd built enough goodwill to swallow it. (er...)

A couple of things I thought I should bring up:

Shego on Drakken: "This whole business of sharing a common goal with him... with him... was SO weird."
Every time we see them, they're working to take over the world. She may not be so invested in that goal as he is, but it's still a cooperation, isn't it?

"If the GJ knew..."
That would be "The Global Justice", so it ought to be "If GJ knew..." or the GJA.

On the upside, some particular gems:
Shego touches the forth wall: “you really are straight out of Disney, aren'tcha?”
Such a good line.

Chopper pilots "Capt. Krache and Lt. Burns". Got to love a good pun.

Drakken and Shego helping each other to attract Ron and Kim.

The“YOU WERE kissing Drakken! You WERE KISSING Drakken! You were KISSING -” scene.

Kim's floundering squeamishness as she tries to square the image of "Mayberry RFD" Kim Possible with her desire for Shego, or any woman.

Kim's lesbianism being an open secret to everyone in town except her.

Excellent work. Green with envy. Off to read your other work now.

I gotta start by saying that I almost fell off my chair when I found out Monique being the Leather Mistress! XD (And for a moment I thought it was Tara!! XD)

AHEM! Eh... going back to the beggining of the chapter. I must say that I really, REALLY liked the Rokken's part on this. Drakken can't help but to worry about what future could he have with someone like Ron, but then again, Ron is right about they having to live in the present. One way or the other, what would be the point of worrying? To give up a possible chance to be happy with someone just because of being scared of getting hurt... is kinda coward. Again, like Ron said, they simply can't know what will happen in the future, but they got to try to find out, right? Gotta bet on it. There may be pain, yeah, but that's a part of life too, and usually, it's the one thing that reminds you how worth is to live happy.

Oh! And kudos to Drakken for having the courage to stand up to Shego!

Now, back to Kim. It makes me wonder, your fics usually have a third lesbian on the show to work as a supportive character for Kim, don't they? In "Alone, Together", it was Tara. Here's Monique. In... Revelations is Ron or Josh? XD.
Anyway. Now poor Kim is seriously gonna have to deal with the paparazzi (How the heck do you spell that?) considering how she came out... and damn, can there be really worse ways? Uh... better remind myself of what I once heard: Things can ALWAYS be worse.
Yet, this time (Bah, always), I hope they get better.

SYINR!!

I can see what you meant by... how was it? Pulling the KiGo into it? Well, this chapter was surely overtaken by the lesbian pairing.

The beggining was nice, a good conclusion for the date they had, including a first kiss which, somehow, I think even Ron hadn't really expected. Pretty good so far. But then, all the left Rokken in this chapter was either just funny or as an influence to Shego, which is not a bad thing, but just shows how the "Main Couple" was left in a secondary role for some time. With Kim and Shego having all the drama, they kinda ought to own the spotlight.

I don't know what the heck Mayberry is, but damn, ain't Kim having it hard? Well, similar to "Alone, Together", Kim's the one having it the hardest to admit it to herself, let alone get out of the closet. Was this your eternal portrayal of her? Wait! Don't answer. I'll find out eventually.

So, KiGo's drama is Kim's being in the closet, and Rokken's drama is Drakken coming to terms with Ron being so young. At least that's the stitch so far, and both are still waiting for a resolution.

Well, gotta see that resolution, right?
See ya in next review.

Well, the date was very... gay (XD), but I liked the drama part, when Drakken got nervous and relucant about "all this", but Ron managed to make him stop thinking 'bout that. Don't know much of what to say, though. It was mostly funny, specially with things like the "Bad bad Ron!" at the end. Well, he IS a guy, after all, gay or not.

And on the sidenotes, I gotta say that Shego in the Lara Croft looks is... uh... ehm.. y-you know, well... SEE YA IN NEXT REVIEW!

Rokken was actually the last of your stories that I read, even if it's the first i'm gonna review.

Feeling uncomfortable with the pairing I was sorta sidestepping it until I ran out of other material by you. I'm happy that I eventually got the nerve to jump into this little gem though.

In your usualy fluid style you just make it seem so right for these two to be together, and it was really fun to see Kim get flustered for once :)

Thanks for broadening my horisont, and; please.. never write a drakken/shego, I know you could make me like that pairing, and I really really don't want that!

May I say, this is the fic with the funniest interaction between Shego and Drakken I have seen so far. At the same time, the interaction between Kim and Ron seems kinda... awkward, like uncomfortable to read as much as it was uncomfortable to the characters every now and then, but I went through with it.

Anyway, I'm going to look up to this date.

Yeah, I'm back to reading this fic. Gotta finish what I start, right? Or at least start doing so.

Let me say, this fics gets funnier and funnier with each chapter. First, the personal drama of the four main characters. But my favourite part was definitly the one of Drakken and Shego going shopping for the next dat... I mean, confrontation with Team Possible!!

You know what's odd? You manage to pull the villain/hero romance while keeping their roles in a way that, if it wasn't because of the homosexual fact, it could totally work in the series! XD

See ya in next review!

a squefuly huggably sweet ending to a truly great fanfiction. what more is there to say

Delicious ^.^ Good portrayal of the characters. I could easily see them actually going through the scenarious that you were putting them through. Very good job ^.^

Funny to see how everybody 'cept Drakken is all about "This is not about ME... right?"

So, what are the character's plans about their feelings? To keep the Hero VS Villains stuff at professional level and all that, while meeting in-private during off-the-clock time? XD

Somehow, I can totally see it happening.

It feels odd, you know? After so many long chapters from "Alone, Together", these ones I can read in just minutes! :P

Here I was considering on going to "Accidental Mistress" but for some reason I decided to pick up this fic first. Dunno why, but I considered reading some KP Yaoi for a change.

Wierd introduction, might I say.

One thing I don't think I liked was the fact that, well... this practically applies the "Everybody woke up Gay" factor that I really don't like to find in any kind of fanfic, Yuri or Yaoi, but still, I'm not gonna drop this story just because of that.

There were some funny dialogs around this chapter, something that actually made it a nice introduction, even though, during the beggining, I felt like I could hardly buy any of this. I mean... Drakken knowing Ron's name all out of the sudden? ...whatever.

Well, got to keep reading. Wanna see that dinner ^^

PD: Kim and Shego where fighting for about a WHOLE HOUR?

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Either they have superhuman stamina... or they weren't exactly fighting...