 Azure Zangetsu 2008-11-24 . chapter 1"Oo's ben stealin' my squiggy bitz!? I bet it wuz Kron Goregutz agen! An' hes sellin' dem too!" (looks over at the battle monitor to see Dorkrak with the bag of stolen and then sold squiggy bitz) "DEMZ MY SQUIGGY BITZ!" (rushed to a 'down-pod' and pressed the button, shooting him towards the planet) I'Z BE GETTIN' MY SQUIGGY BITZ BACK!"
Who knew that a simply sack of squiggy bitz could create so much chaos? Amazing job. Da Orky Bosses would say 'Dat's wun gud job' |
 Caedes.Leighton 2006-12-30 . chapter 1Felt sorry for Dorkrak :(
But it was still very funny and I could easily imagine a horde of Orks doing something like that. |
 Extartius 2006-05-10 . chapter 1This was pure unadulterated comedy. I especially liked the bits about the grots! |
 nuclearchimo 2006-01-30 . chapter 1lol really funny |
 wayofthepen 2006-01-14 . chapter 1Yessh! Very Orky. Good job, dis is. |
 N. Kage 2006-01-10 . chapter 1Swish.
Nothing like squiggy bitz ta screw with a 'well laid' battle plan. |
 malac645 2006-01-10 . chapter 1Yep, it's certainly up to your usual phenomenally high standard of comedy and quality writing. It takes a particular talent to turn the most grim, horiffic galaxy into something that makes people laugh themselves off their chairs, and you definitely have it. |