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Reviews for: Squiggy Bitz
Azure Zangetsu
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
"Oo's ben stealin' my squiggy bitz!? I bet it wuz Kron Goregutz agen! An' hes sellin' dem too!" (looks over at the battle monitor to see Dorkrak with the bag of stolen and then sold squiggy bitz) "DEMZ MY SQUIGGY BITZ!" (rushed to a 'down-pod' and pressed the button, shooting him towards the planet) I'Z BE GETTIN' MY SQUIGGY BITZ BACK!"

Who knew that a simply sack of squiggy bitz could create so much chaos? Amazing job. Da Orky Bosses would say 'Dat's wun gud job'
Caedes.Leighton
2006-12-30 . chapter 1
Felt sorry for Dorkrak :(
But it was still very funny and I could easily imagine a horde of Orks doing something like that.
Extartius
2006-05-10 . chapter 1
This was pure unadulterated comedy. I especially liked the bits about the grots!
nuclearchimo
2006-01-30 . chapter 1
lol really funny
wayofthepen
2006-01-14 . chapter 1
Yessh! Very Orky. Good job, dis is.
N. Kage
2006-01-10 . chapter 1
Swish.
Nothing like squiggy bitz ta screw with a 'well laid' battle plan.
malac645
2006-01-10 . chapter 1
Yep, it's certainly up to your usual phenomenally high standard of comedy and quality writing. It takes a particular talent to turn the most grim, horiffic galaxy into something that makes people laugh themselves off their chairs, and you definitely have it.
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