Brilliant, and sad, and just a tad freaky. I felt a chill reading this story. Excellent job!

I haven't read one of your fics in a really long time and this one was probably one of the best Vaughn's POV made in a long time.

The phrase 'Sometimes it seems like, between my dad and my friends, I don't really have a say in my own life.' just clicked, you know? It fits perfectly cause you can see how they can be really unfaired with hi sometimes.

I mean, he IS his father after all and they ARE his friends overall (at least some of them).

Poor dude, he's

-ShiVeRs!