wow, awesome story there cimple. gotta say, love, love, LOVE your work. it's a shame though that you have yet to finish this story. so i know it's been some time since you last updated, and you probably don't even remember what you were going to do with this work...but do you think you could try to finish it? i'm sure some others would love you to as well.
well, any hoot, if you don't either, it's still cool and all, and you can still be my fav ff writer ;>

I've read the entire thing, but I've only gotten around to reviewing now.
Most people would never think of putting street racing, high school, and Teen Titans in the same fic. Those who do think of it, and couple it with brilliant plot twists and dazzling storytelling, deserve a million reviews filled with kind words and encouragement.
I'm not particularly a fan of the RedXxRae pairing, but your unrivaled storytelling skills got me to stick around.
Once again, you've struck readers dumb with amazing tales. The incorporation of Sin, Nightriders, and the Seven Deadly Sins poetry, was superb. Honestly, where do you get your ideas? Love the rivalry between Rorek and Malchior. Were you trying to allude it to the story in the actual show, or just wanted to have them fighting over her? Having Raven be Sin was perfect, who says guys are the only ones who can be badass?
Please try to update. If you want, I can try and think up some ideas for you. Just tell me where you want the story to go. I can brainstorm, but have trouble putting it in a Word document. Just a suggestion.
Chocolate Eyes Black Soul (The Dread Pirate Kidd)

uh...wow! i just read the entire thing non stop its great! your a wonderful author! i liked your other stories too! well till next time, good luck!

I think this is a great story, had me reading until well past midnight... however, I also see that you haven't updated this story in like, 2 YEARS?! I think a lot of the fans of Raven/x and your stories in general would appreciate it if you continued this fanfic. I know I would.

Anyway, on to the chapter, I think that personally, Raven should clue X in as to how important she is to stopping Trigon. Probably not tell him directly, just sort of a nudge in the right direction. I have noticed a few spelling errors, and sentence fragments, but those can be overlooked if you UPDATE!

PLEASE? This story is one of the best (along with all of your other stories) on this site. It would be a shame if you abandoned it like this.

i like this story alot! please continue it! raven better kick Trigon's and slade's ass!
update?

:p

Oo very nice i likey XD

This is interesting. Very Interesting.
Damn, I wish you continued ... the story looks like its going somewhere.
Well, its a shame;
a darn shame.
But no worries, you're still categorized as my favorite auther for Raven/RedX.
And well TT in general.
Til Next Time !

are you going to update this fic? because i happen to find it and i got real intrested in the story and im wondering if you'll update just is been a Very long time since you have

Hello Cimple dear,

Was browsing through some classics, and came across DCB, which was gorgeously written of course, I've missed it.

I've been having an XRaven craving lately, and I've yet to find anything to satisfy it besides your recent Famous fiction.

Now, in regards to this sudden review, I am overly curious at the moment. I'd like to ask on what cars you used in DCB if you have the time, I'd appreciate it.

Perhaps you have the exact years and models listed somewhere, or you can only recall vague descriptions, anything would be fine. I'm just spontaneously curious at the moment. For this whole while, I was thinking of a Ford MUSTANG, not at all a GT. Silly me.

please update soon, its almost 2008!

my brains numb from reading so much. clap clap clap

OMG that story... omg! it is so awesume i can't get enough of it. I love the plot line the charecters, how you developed the story evrything I LOVE IT. Gosh all your stories are amazing the one that you started "thousand shades of Gray" Genious. I love your stories. You are one of the best fanfic writers i've seen so far.

see ya~
Tak-Tak signing out

Meh. Meh. I'm still going to back up my statement that their relationship or more so her attitude to her relationship just doesn't fit in with the story.

She's letting him get away with too many things. Frankly, if I were in her shoes, I would get more pissed off. Ronan's right. He's becoming a problem. And in one way or another, he needs to get fixed.

As much as I'm a fangirl of both Red and Raven, and even more with them together. I don't do squealage just for that. I consider the story. As a whole. And simply put, in my opinion, the relationship is becoming TOO much. A bit, was fine. But I'm just waiting on Raven's Take No Crap attitude especially when she's threatened. And that's now.

Mhm.

Luck on your update. No hurries. Hope inspiration comes to you.

This is REALLY good, you already know how much of a fan I am.

Mhm. Less fluff. More ass-kicking. I like it.

One chapter left. I'll you on alert.

Omg .. So late .. can you believe that .. half an hour a chapter .. My head .. hurts..

I almost got confused when Jinx babbled about the Gladiator, since why would Raven follow Trigon?

Meh. Tomorrow.. I'm gonna pass out.