I have to admit reading this last chapter made me laugh as it reminded me of what my sister in law said about my brother when she gave birth. It was a joy to read :)

I was in the car the other day, thinking about this story, when a song started playing on the radio. The lyrics began with "I'd give up forever to touch you..." I just sat there, in shock I think, before I started laughing like a madman. It was one of the starngest coincidences I have ever had. Several of the chapter titles were in the song as well. Very, very, strange.

I am completely in LOVE with your story. There's humour,witty remarks as well as tenderness and plenty of romance. ;)

I love the whole idea of Haldir's humility, how he grows and changes. Chara's character is by far one of the most believable (and likeable!) OC's I've read, and it's nice to see, with each chapter, a new layer of her personality unfold.

This story is simply amazing and your writing style is fantastic! All I can say is WOW WOW WOW!

This was a lovely story to read, I really enjoyed it. Well done :)

I've read the whole story now, and I can just say: Wow! Really wonderful, and I love the ending. There is humor, Cahra is an amazing character. Seems she have the control, even though it seemed different in the begining... xD

When u make new stories (specially Haldir stories) I want you to tell me, mate! xD

Sweet and nice.

I LOVE your story very much. It's rare to come across a good Haldir/OC fic but this one really leaves an imprint in my mind. I love (and hate) Haldir's personality here, and your OC was interesting and very believable as well. I particularly enjoyed the comment Haldir made about killing Orophin, that made me crack up so bad. Come to think about it, I was in hysterics in other parts also. Keep it up!

(Also, I'm glad it's complete, I HATE reading a fic that isn't finished!)

Saurowen :)

Great story. Haldir is nice, but a little stuck on himself. It's nice to see him taken down a peg or four. I didn't like the bold text. Makes it difficult to read. There was a little rambling, but not much. Keep up the good work.

Loved it.

very nice

I think is the third time i've read this! Sorry I haven't reviewed before, i hadn't quite realized how much authors crave it (that was only because i had yet to post anything on here!). I love this story and the personality that you've created for Haldir!

madi

This is fantastic too! Great job!

Aw sweetness!

This was a very sweet scene, and I've noticed why I like your style so much. It's moving fast without any precendent, which is normally a bad thing, but your OC's general... unfeelingness towards Haldir is slowing it down naturally. Well done.

I really like your writing style, and I can't wait to read more.