 Dido 2008-04-13 . chapter 8 aww really sweet story |
| xxcocoxx 2008-04-13 . chapter 16 oh dear whats with the bunny |
| Maddy 2008-04-13 . chapter 19 Ecellent story well done |
| Maddy 2008-04-13 . chapter 1 o kwl star love the lil girl so far she seems cute |
 Meco-lia 2008-04-13 . chapter 18they shimmered duh! |
| Meco-lia 2008-04-13 . chapter 15 hehehehehe! very good |
| Meco-lia 2008-04-13 . chapter 7 ITS LEO I KNOW ITS LEO
lol brill job |
| Meco-lia 2008-04-13 . chapter 19 that was one powerful lil girl! and boy ofcourse!
excellent story |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 19 Great chapter... Well Done... ;) I liked this story... Well done :) |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 18 Elders are stupid.. The kids can also shimmer, so they could be save...Great chapter... Well Done... ;) |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 17 Great chapter... Well Done... ;) |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 16 Great chapter... Well Done... ;) |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 15 funny chapter... Well done... ;) |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 14 that's sweet... Great chappie... Well done ;) |
| Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 13 Great chapter... Do they all know now? Well Done ;) |
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