Dido 2008-04-13 . chapter 8 aww really sweet story |
xxcocoxx 2008-04-13 . chapter 16 oh dear whats with the bunny |
Maddy 2008-04-13 . chapter 19 Ecellent story well done |
Maddy 2008-04-13 . chapter 1 o kwl star love the lil girl so far she seems cute |
Meco-lia 2008-04-13 . chapter 18they shimmered duh! |
Meco-lia 2008-04-13 . chapter 15hehehehehe! very good |
Meco-lia 2008-04-13 . chapter 7ITS LEO I KNOW ITS LEO
lol brill job |
Meco-lia 2008-04-13 . chapter 19that was one powerful lil girl! and boy ofcourse!
excellent story |
Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 19Great chapter... Well Done... ;) I liked this story... Well done :) |
Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 18Elders are stupid.. The kids can also shimmer, so they could be save...Great chapter... Well Done... ;) |
Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 17Great chapter... Well Done... ;) |
Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 16Great chapter... Well Done... ;) |
Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 15funny chapter... Well done... ;) |
Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 14that's sweet... Great chappie... Well done ;) |
Lientjuhh 2008-03-23 . chapter 13Great chapter... Do they all know now? Well Done ;) |