AH, the Martin Farm. Well, that was a powerful moment in the movie. It scared me to death when I saw it the first time at theatre. Now, after countless times watching the DVD I know the dialouge all by heart.
Nonetheless, it was fascinating to read the narrative around the spoken words. It is even more difficult to tell a story in a spellbinding way, when people already know what will happen. But I discovered some very interesting aspects you have created for the different characters.
The agenda thing when Tavington is dealing with Benjamin Martin was great! Good idea.
And you sketched Tavington very well when he talks to one of the freedmen. Especially his thoughts of what he has planned for the future of the plantation.
I'm curious to see how you will develope the characters when they are taken away from the plot of the movie.
Update soon, please.

Respect! Your story starts very much unlike most Patriot fanfics, especially when Tavington is concerned.
It was very interesting to read how the Dragoons fought in a 'legal' battle for a change. Mostly they are shown when doing some raids.
I like the idea that Tavington shares a tent with Bordon. Usually he has a tent or room of his own, well, we all know why... Not so here.
I especially liked the scene when Tavington has his hair open. I laughed about the hint of the wig wearing high officers. I'm with you there.
Let's see how the story will go on.

interestting I like it.