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Iris Domingo
2006-01-15 . chapter 1
Gypsy... rainbow... you know I fancy them. And a crimson rainbow! He he, just high on sugar I guess.

Such beauty! I can't say much, except that you misspell harlot for harlet, ninth line of third stanza.

Keep writing, as you are born to do such craft.
RockinRai
2006-01-12 . chapter 1
You know how I feel about the Bible, but I really like this poem. You sure are fancy with them there words. this is good.
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