This is beautiful, plz do more i love it

great series. update soon please. you are on my story alert list and my fave author list.

Love it! absolutely wonderful!:)

I like the bits in italics. John's thoughts and memories seem very well placed in the narrative. It would be nice to see some more of the reactions from the other people that are close to John. Although I adore the Sheyla bits! Thanks and keep writing!

Um..hello! You can't leave me like this...I MUST HAVE more! but, I still wove you..YOU BROUGHT HIM BACK! Thank you! x Camy

::happy sigh:: Lovely, lovely, lovely. You write this pairing so flipping well!

Love it! that was so great! i new that somethin like this would happen i mean they couldn't just send him back with all that lovely knowledge in that lovely head of his!:)

Hey, I think this was great...

Done a great.. job..

Great new chapter! It'll be interesting to see how you deal with this. Please update soon!

Oh Thank You Ritter!

Reaches out and hugs computer screen...nothing can keep John away from Teyla...

um...you're not going to do anything evil are you?

LOL..you know I'll read it no matter what you write!

Love it! oh yes HE's BAck!

oh, very interesting so far! Does John remember anything? pls update soon!

Wow. This is great! Please keep going! It's like when Daniel Jackson was sent back to earth after ascending! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Don't we have enough Daniel's in the verse'? LOL! Lovely story.

Squee! Is he really back?