 dasiyanne 4/24/05 . chapter 1 I really like all your RB fanfics. This is one of my favorites. I also like you fanfic "A gift for Shy Violet." I really like the character Amethyst. Is he your creation? Anyway I would like to hear more about where he comes from and those who live there. Maybe you could even have Rainbow and the color kids(or maybe just Shy Violet) visit Opal Hall for some reason and meet Fire Opal and Topaz and the rest. Just the same I really enjoy reading your RB fanfics. Please keep writing! |
 Sunshine Sam 5/23/02 . chapter 1Very cute. Nice touch with "Those meddling kids." Very realistic plot. I really like the portrayal of the different races, including the women with beards. Well done. |
 James Birdsong 9/7/01 . chapter 1 Oh wow this was good. Should have been an actual episode _ |
 DeNerd 7/22/01 . chapter 1 Nice story. It was very interesting, also Amethyst is one of my favorite characters. |
 Moonglo 5/10/01 . chapter 1Great story! I can see this one being made into a real episode, very nicely done. |
 Garnet Sky 5/6/01 . chapter 1quite an adventure shy violet had |