I like it. I noticed you took the idea of Daemons from the golden compass and incorerated it into this story. Cool.

What's up Rosa the Champion Duelist, I thought this story was very interesting and different from every other YUGIOH story I've read. Keep up the good work.

P.S. Your name is pretty cool Champion Duelist!

You're welcome. I'm glad I could help! ^_^ I like the name you came up with. It's quite fitting.

This was an intriguing chapter. A being from another galaxy! This is the Suiking Lightningpaw that you draw so often, right? She seems like a fun character.

Excellent chapter! I can't wait to see what befalls them on Draconia!

Not bad. Can't wait for more. Keep writing!

I can tell you're a Kaiba fan more that a Yugi fan. How are you gonna keep the story even, having even parts in both Kaiba's point of view and the pov with Yugi and Yami. Especially now that Kaiba is going off to fight Baccah. There isn't gonna be much action at the station. Unless, Katrina is going to cause some problems with her being a servant of Baccah. Oh, the possiblities! Keep writing!

cute! I really like it so far!

Very interesting developments here.

Uh-oh, I hope Mokuba doesn't get hurt! This boulder whatsis, it's a trap, right?

Excellent chapter! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen!

Ha! Someone's read Phillip Pullman's His Dark Materials series, haven't they? I love those books... This looks really interesting. Seto as a bounty hunter = awesome, and these bad guys are sure to cause some angst. Angst is good. ;)

Very excellent beginning!

Great story so far. Looking foreward to more.

Very interesting start! Looking forward to more.