Aparoids...arn't they from starfox asault

I LUV THIS STORY I WAS CRACKIN UP!

LOL! This story is hilarious!! I love it! It's going on my favourites list! Okay? YAY!!

I like this chapter, I will read the rest another time!

HAHAHAHA tat was HILARIOUS i cant believe it dude that was just to funny its hahaha look im still laughing i have voices but haha good job

Wow Liz really did stay truthfull to her note.

LOL you should make a sequel! This is one of my all time favorite sonic the hedghehog stories!

wow that was a long time! ISH THERE MORE?

Heh, funny! I almost forgot about this story. I suppose by your foreshadowing that you're making a sequel? That'd be cool, XD.

Yay! You continued! Nice chappie XD

Holy Cow!! I thought chapter 12 was the last chapter!! o.o anyways, cool story, I loved it :]]

Whoo! Epilogue!

And yay! Go Punio!

Hm... that reminds me. I have a voucher for a free week at a resort in Boggly Woods. Must use that sometime...

I like it. Next time, don't fling yourself into the story to just move the plot. I'm not that kind of reader who likes that. In Biomechanical Souls I can accept the fact that there are five new Ultimate Life Forms. Plus, those characters play a major role in the story. And you, I only read one chapter and I'm not expecting a big part set for you. You can replace yourself with someone else. I don't know. Dr.Phil?!?! No, I'm just kidding! ^_^

I'ma go find out what Shadow's line was! ^-^

Liz shoulda pointed the nail gun at Sonic's crotch, that woulda been funnier...and I honestly couldn't stop laughing at that part with Knuckles rolling in grass, I think I was imagining it wrong (in my mind he was all happy-like)...grass is a funny word...grass...

I was wondering...does your neighbor really have a Swedish Schnauzer, or did you just think of something random? Or both?

Poor Knuckie...(not really)