Great story I hope you continue.

this was great. i love tommy and kim stories. i hate Kitty, i mean shes a ditzy air head aussie, not that all aussis are that, but i just hat her, and i love this story! laters.

This was a great story :-)

I LOVED that whole thing! It was soooooo good! I think you could make a sequel about Trini and Jason, how Kimberly and Tommy are doing, marriage, children. You could also do sumthing about Billy and his "ice queen". And maybe make her a maneater or sumthing. But I would really like to see Tommy and Kim's kids.

Wow, that was great. I know, I know! The sequal could talk about their lives like two years later or something. Telling us where they ended up...married with children (K/T wink wink). How Trini and Jason are doing and what happened to Crazy Dave etc. You don't have to write more if you don't want to. Those are just some suggestions. Anyway, like I said before, that was a great new chapter. I look forward to hearing from you again. Morgan

That was amazing, Leaving me at the end of my seat. How could u do that? I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey Han love the little dedication - brill story!

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This is a great story, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh no! Who was it? I can't believe this! This chapter was great, just like the ones that followed. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see who it was that was shot. Morgan

It's great how you don't rush into the whole Tommy/Kim realationship right away like other stories.I love the story & keep up the good work!

That was another great chapter Hanspam. Keep up the good work and I hope to hear from you again soon. Get Tommy and Kim back together pretty pretty please. Oh, and good luck on your exam tomorrow. I feel your final (20% of you grade...argh...) exam pains. Morgan

This is another excellent chapter. Your work improves with each new addition. Keep up the great work and post more soon.

Shawn

THis is great

Hanspam, your writing is very good. I like the entire premise behind the story and it explains a lot about Kim in her Florida years. Only one peeve so far, why is Trini written like she's a totally manipulative, guy crazy freak? Maybe you'll shed some light on this in further chapters but it kind of disturbs me to read about her as a non-caring guy stealer. Other than that, this story is getting real intersting!