Good job so far, can't wait for the next chapter.

I did not clearly understand anything about the story past the tenth chapter. Please correct me if I'm wrong.

Naruto was an ANBU, withdrawn and bitter because of the eternal hardships he had had to endure from the start. He gets assigned a genin team, which is a parallel of the Team 7's of the past. One of those genin has flashbacks of the past where it tie's in with another series. Meanwhile, Sakura is regretful of her role in pushing Naruto into withdrawal, as well as all the times she's made him suffer.

The twist is that Naruto's dying, the Hyuuga and a few other people know about it. Naruto brings Sasuke back, gaining a Mangekyou in the process, fulfilling his promise, yet also fully closing his heart to his former friend. Both Sakura and Sasuke find out that he's dying.

Here's where it gets weird for me. He fights Itachi but somehoew gets captured by Orochimaru. He miraculously has a daughter, is actually a grand chessmaster shinobi since he was fifteen, and becomes a god. He also kills most of Akatsuki.

What.

WoW this is really good, I freakin' love it! Brilliant fic _

OMG! You did such a FABULOUS good on this! O

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

A pretty good story. A little rushed, but still good. At the end it says end of part one. Is there going to be a part two?

omg... this was AWESOME! its been so long since i read a story that had me so enticed that i literally had to pull myself away from the screen to go to work!

there was so much in this story that you had me guessing all the way through. i love it when a story does that! even better when you threw in a daughter, i was like holly shit, not to mention i knew exactly what Sasuke found right off the bat and i was even more like HOLLY SHIT, especially when the hand twitched!

i hope you come out with a sequel soon, i am so excited!

OK i read through the whole thing and I am ... not adding this to my favorites just yet. Here is my problem. Length. It is not detailed enough for it to be ready to be vague.

Now i know that sounds weird but in a vague story there should be hints, peek a boos, and all that stuff in the story so that readers are still able to pick out and choose. What you are doing is jumping the shark. I have no idea where this story is going, I like that. BUt It is so vague that the Story makes me shy away from it a great deal.

The story has some great moments, lines, and chapters but overall it just lacks a lot of 'stuff'. I can only say its 'good' but i can't say its 'amazing.'

This story can be at levels like Nine Broken mirrors and Itachi and the prisoner of Azkaban levels or scrape close. Its just lacking detail on scenery, emotion, and things like that. The detail about life and formalities, about the tid bits on the side, those were excellent but there is not enough 'meat' to compliment the Potato salad.

I shall read your sequel!

Cant wait to read the next part !

you said at the end there was to be a squeal? what happen to that? -.-

wow this was well thought out, you must have planned it pretty far in advance.

though I don't really like a depressed Naruto there are good reasons for it. well done

before i start yes thats my username didnt feel like logging in. ok from what i can get Naruto is a type of reincarnation Chihaya right? if not please explain. also where did all that power goto in the end seals just dont cut it in the face of a gods power they can restrain but thats it nothing can contain a gods power unless its a demi-god unless Naruto is holding it back which is possible considering the fact it is his body or rather 'their' body in regards to Chihaya. please correct me if im wrong story was pretty vague but interesting. overall i liked it

a sequal really? oh thank you thank you thank you! THANK YOU! i cnat wait i want to see peoples reactions to naruto's clone thingy and his daughter!

:D sequal! :D

this was awesome! :D

hahah