OH MY GOD.
I loved how everything seemed to seam together flawlessly.
You are amazing.
end of story :)
Cant wait to read the sequel!!
this gets a fave! yaa!!

Where is the rest?

Say, where is the sequel to this story?

I've been reading the last few chapters while listening to this song :

/watchv=lA_BsIMpt0&feature=related

And let me tell you at add a wonderful atmosphere to the story and helped with the mystically surruel feeling. Do listen.

Love your story. Made me cry at the last few chapters because this song is sad and all the hints of something bad happening to Naruto just made me cry. Couldn't help it. Love it.

this story made my brain hurt, there was way to much ** going on.

hope the sequel helps.

THat was very confusing. Very cool but very confusing. The OCs are nice though I do wonder what will happen to Suzume and Team 7. Poor Naruto...

OMG. That was just fricken AWSOME! i mean... wow. Just holy crap. It made my brin hurt and i loved it... got to see part two... ^_~

I can tell you quite honestly that you're English is far been than 85% of my classmates. My honors and Advanced Placement classmates. You are quite a good writer. Just wanted to perhaps explain why I think no one gives you constructive reviews. cuz there isn't much to fix:)

Great story so far. I'm interested to see where you go with this. You also have very good grammer usege most authors on this website can't write storys as good as they could due to improper grammer. My email is on my profile if you want to write me back. Damn. Usually I don't write that serious of a reveiw. Am I growing up too fast?! NO WHERE DID MY CHILDHOOD AND SENSE OF HUMOR GO?!?! DAMN YOU GOLDEN MAGIC MONKEY! Look at my profile to understand where the monkey thing came from.

When are you going to post the sequel? This is an awesome fic! I want to know who that is in the dome. Whos hand twitched.

awesome fic, cant wait for a part two

Interesting effort. Speaking from a reader's perspective, the setup left the ending predictable and a bit melodramatic. The flow of the plot was jerky in places and seemed to deteriorate as the story went on rather than improve, but your command of the English language mitigated the blow to a certain extent. Your style also seems a bit unstable. You wander from lyrical prose back to a more narrative 'tell it as it is' without truly blending the two; the former usually denoted when you're trying to instill some form of emotion into a passage. Unfortunately, the transition ends up a bit transparent, at least in my opinion. Nothing a good revision or rewrite wouldn't fix.

Thanks for sharing.

I really loved it! Whose hand twitched? Poor Naruto. Great job.

*nudge nudge* sequel? :D

i love this story. i'm surprised i didn't review this last chapter...i thought i did. anyways, amazing story i just reread it. i NEED the sequel XD; desperately. so put it up soon!!:D

~*Kira*~

interesting. very good