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Cyberweasel89 2008-07-22 ch 1,	abuseI must say, it is nice to see another girl on who is writing stories with such brilliant ideas behind them. And unlike myself, your stories are actually very well-written. I noticed a few run-on sentences. But the first chapter was written about two years ago, so I am sure your skills have greatly improved. The idea behind this is very engaging, and your writing is very engrossing. I found myself unable to stop reading upon the first chapter alone. I shall continue reading the rest of this story with great earnest. You have amazing skill and ability when it comes to building a story.
yuu1202 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abusehey good story i think i might read the rest i cant wait to see how his gennin team turns out i hope he doesnt scare them to much lol
InARealPickle 2008-06-06 ch 10,	abuseI liked the addition of Hinata It gave the story even more depth
InARealPickle 2008-06-06 ch 9,	abuseI cried when Naruto begged the other soul to allow his death Have I mentioned lately how much I love this fic?
mountainelements 2008-06-04 ch 11,	abuseWow, I hadn't realized that Orochimaru had captured a bunshin. This story is really confusing.
mountainelements 2008-06-03 ch 2,	abuseYou're having Naruto show your views, aren't you? :) I can't see Naruto worrying too much about getting cancer from soda with his healing abilities.
TheDon1023 2008-05-23 ch 12,	abuseyou should of categorized this story as Mystery. seriously damn!
chineseartist 2008-05-21 ch 12, anon.	abusewow. this fic is something else. i like to read heavy stuff every now and then, so it's always fun to find it on fanficiton sites. i'll definitely check out the sequel.
dolores26 2008-05-08 ch 2,	abusei didn't think one was supposed to leave a lid on recyclable items. lovely story :D enjoyed the coffee from hell and cancer sticks part :D
Kraecha 2008-05-06 ch 12,	abuseWell, i'm a bit confused... In one moment i was sure you killed Naruto, but then i read about the encounter with the Akatsuki :) Anyway, it was a great story. I really liked your Naruto, powerfull and inteligent. I thought maybe you would write a bit more about his team, but i guess it was OK, as they weren't main characters :) I was startled when you introduced Suzume. At first it was a bit strange, but now, after reading the whole think, and after this beautiful ending i have to say, i hope you will write more about her in the sequel :) What else...? Your story was like a drug - when i started reading it, i couldn't stop XD About characters - Sasuke was just like he is supposed to be. Avenger, brooding, but after some time a bit caring for his friends. Hinata was simply amazing. I hope she will end up with Naruto :D Sakura was natural as well. Kakashi's and Naruto's dialoges about Icha Icha were great. Oh, and i fell in love with your Neji :) Great friend he is :D To say it shortly, it was a really great story.
Jiran 2008-05-01 ch 12,	abuseMy god, that was an excellent work. Interesting plot, well put together. I only have one critique: make sure you spell character's names correctly, namely Uchiha Madara. There were several times you wrote Mandara.
Lady Okori 2008-04-14 ch 12,	abuse... ... ...Did he reincarnate himself or leave behind another body to inhabit or something? This was a pretty cool story. I haven't read dark stories like this for a while, so it was refreshing in a sense. The blood ties and reincarnations were my favorite plots. I mean, cousins? Awesome.
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseupdate soon
Gai Bureze 2008-04-06 ch 12,	abusewah? christ that was confusing. I mean, that was some serious neon genesis evangaleon level of strange dialogue and messages there. I liked the idea, but I think the delivery was a bit too strange for me... but remember, I'm the kind of person who loves action-comedy in my movie genres, and who has watched all of "Green Green", I mean, seriously. My opinion counts as nothing after that.
yumeniai 2008-03-24 ch 12,	abusewow, it's amazingly written! I couldn't stop reading it...(all the way til' 2am...) can't wait to read the sequel!

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