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Rameelia
2009-11-26 . chapter 10
Well, I'm sad it's over, but, on the other hand, it seemed like the perfect place to end it. It was an immensely enjoyable read, despite the fact that I find Mpreg a tad ludicrous (doesn't prevent me from reading, though). However, your explanation of the whole process sort of made sense, so, in the end, I didn't really mind it all that much.

Snape was well in character throughout the whole story, even the sentimental moments. I loved that you made him reluctant and willing (kind of) at the same time about admitting his growing feelings for Harry. That was so sweet. :) Harry felt a bit... too emotional for my tastes. But, maybe, it can be passed off as hormones. Not complaining though, if that was what won Snape over. :P

Oh and, Snake was a nice touch, too.

All in all, adorable story! Thanks so much for sharing this!
Heksie
2009-08-31 . chapter 10
O i did love the fic...
Anon.
2009-08-30 . chapter 10
This story was good. i mean it wasnt the best ever. It was funny how similar it was to another story ive read. but dont worry in the other story harry is married to malfoy not snape. also it was kinda wierd how much of a difference harry and snape are in age. i can just imagine: harry around middle aged and snape an old man with wrinkles and everything. bleh! oh well. the story was good and hope to read another story from you!
reeby10
2009-08-05 . chapter 10
Ach that was great!! And I don't usually like Snarry that much XD hehe But it was such and interesting premise and you pulled it off perfectly!! Snape taking care of Charlie was absolutely adorable!! Loved the whole thing!! :D
Fernsfairie
2009-06-22 . chapter 10
I liked this story. Not to heavy on the slash, just enough to show us what was going on. It was pretty good.
CarlisleAliceJazzCullen
2009-05-26 . chapter 10
Ah yes, the Great Cushion Massacre of 1997. I wonder if Hermione added it to the appendices of Hogwarts: A History? haha That was quite funny, who killed a duck in here haha

I enjoyed this story quite a bit. To my favourites it goes! :D
CarlisleAliceJazzCullen
2009-05-26 . chapter 9
I enjoyed Snape's attempts at explaining away Draco befriending Harry et al haha!

When did Snape figure out Dumbledore probably already knew the child was his- and does Dumbledore know how the child was conceived? I feel like I missed a whole section there because one minute Snape's smirking cuz he outsmarted Dumbledore and the next... ah well, whatever- it's all the twinkling eyes- it's enough to turn anyone mad :)
trollen
2009-04-16 . chapter 10
A good story, and a good ending
hawkswench
2009-02-01 . chapter 10
what about Snapes dream of a little boy?
aalens
2009-01-12 . chapter 7
Totally agree about the avocado on soy and linseed toast mit lemon juice and pepper. Additionally I like to add a quarter to third of an inch slice (sic) of iceberg lettuce which makes it crunchy as well as delicious. Yum
Yummy story too, though Harry cries an awful lot. Don't think I could live with such a waterworks - despite our current drought here in Oz. LOL
BTW very thinly sliced cold tomato on hot buttered toast, preferably soy-linseed of, with white pepper (white is more delicate in flavour than the fashionable black pepper) and the merest smidgen of sea salt (has to be sea salt) is scrumptiously yum too.
aalens
2009-01-12 . chapter 3
Well written and very entertaining. Thanks. Love the concept too and how beautifully you have fleshed it all out. (Well, apart from Neville being the vanquisher of HWMNBN, I like Harry to be 'The One' LOL)
Rokkis
2008-12-14 . chapter 10
One of the most unique plot-bunnies I have ever read!! But so amusing! Am glad that everything worked out for Harry and Sev!
Good job!

Cheers!
Bebe-RonLover
2008-11-15 . chapter 10
I love it!
I wonder if there is a sequel, guess I should
look at your profile and see,but I do hope there is.
Great Job, hilarious to the end.
Love and Light
Schnuffie
2008-10-22 . chapter 10
Great story! Makes me laugh and smile... *sigh*
*mems*
Light of Luka
2008-10-20 . chapter 10
Lol i liked this. Very cute. Haha Captain Peroxide
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