great story plz make more!

this was pretty good and sorry about your friend. :(

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I've read all your fanfics in this and they're really good. And I was thinking that what happened here would have been a good episode in the show. I can't wait to read your next "master piece".

Sweet, I can imagine him not knowing what a fiance is but not a girlfriend wow he's dumb a cool ** though.

very nice chapter and series of fac fic hope you get the other 10 done soon

I love it !it`s awsome( could you do me a favor and write a JaydonAlexis story for me??)

awesum stories!
keep it up!!

Like your storys . Keep going .

that ending was horrible.

3 words: You are awesome! :D

And this story is awesome too :)
~Thail

your story is the best i have ever hear in pasting time. truly pure write.

Awesome job on Chapter 1, I'll read more tomorrow and review again. :) Sub and favorite on all!

brillent i cant wate till the next one

These stories are really good so far!