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Reviews for: Of Sunrise and Cigarettes
la dissonance
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
I love this chapter so much! I love how it's more about the love part than the unrequited part; it's angst but it doesn't wallow it its angst. She's more rational about it, but not unemotional...yay yay yay. Did I mention I love the way you portrayed this? Well done :)
Kerrsz
2008-02-05 . chapter 2
I can't sleep, I'm bored, and I didn't expect this to be the marvelously good story it turned out to be.
So thanks for that!
la dissonance
2007-10-04 . chapter 2
your writing style is very much a stream-of-conscious thing, it was very evocative and made for a fast read.
Anidori-Kiladra
2007-05-05 . chapter 2
That was GOOD. I haven't found too many femmeslash fics I really like, but Padma was just...wow. I have no words.
~Ani
lillee
2006-11-08 . chapter 2
nice fic, im just glad that your shipped Padma and Hermione, not a lot of people think of that. Nice with the masturbating in the library, added to an inside joke with my friends and i ::lol::
"i'm not like you""so what?"
2006-08-01 . chapter 1
i love parminder nagra, too :)
SynergyFox
2006-06-21 . chapter 2
Now this... this story has made me a fan of Padma/Hermione... though I cant give up Fleur and Hermione... but... wow... good story!
The Milk of Human Kindness
2006-05-14 . chapter 2
Wow, I'm discovering what a great writer you are. This was a marvelous story...I only wish it weren't complete, because I would love to read more about Padma and Hermione. Well done!
sailorswithhearts
2006-05-02 . chapter 2
I loved this. Great job!
I doubt you really care
2006-04-12 . chapter 2
I must admit, I never read such stories especially surrounding a character I do not particularly like. But today I decided to try something new and to my pleasant surprise it was you. A wonderful story so far and though it is based off of fantasy, it seems so real in its substance. It was almost so real it scared me. I also want to let you know that this is possibly the most poetic and articulate story I have ever read on this entire website. So I hope you eventually get this and take this as a compliment. There is nothing I see to criticize but you made me enjoy a character I have never enjoyed. Take this as a rare compliment.

signed,
Your audience for the day
Jaceyisonfiyah
2006-02-03 . chapter 2
Oh emm gee. I loved this. I was browsing around for random couples and I didn't even know that a Padma/Hermione fic even existed! Awesome. Just aweseome.

I really like your writing style. Now I'm going to have to raid your profile for your other stuff...hmm... Anyways I liked this fic, and the whole angst factor was a big plus.
Hedwig Potter
2006-01-16 . chapter 1
so sar so good!
parminder nagra is a very sood actress bye the way. she's in Bend it like Beckham, elle enchanted, and E.R. that i know of.
leggomystego
2006-01-14 . chapter 2
gosh, this is pretty.
okay, i'll do better. i like the way you've written it & there's this kind of sweet urgency to the language that pulled me forward: it's good. & i liked the parminder nagra reference, & the sexy side of smart girls. & gosh, it's pretty.
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