Awesome fic! I can't wait for the rest. Hope you update soon. This made me start off the day with some dbz humor in mind. Horray!

~VCG

Um, are you going to finish soon? I mean, will Goku save Veggie? Will the dragonballs become back to normal? AND WILL THE FUSIONS EVER GET ANOTHER FIC CENTERED AROUND THEM?! By the way, if youre looking for DBZ episodes, go onto to and download the basic limewire. The all you have to do is type the name of the episode you want and you can get it! By the way, e-mail me sometime, I live pretty far from you and I'd like to have a pen pal. Youre the NUMBER ONE AUTHOR! Rock on!

You are the greatest fanfic author in the universe! I have read nearly every story you write. I love the way Goku acts so cute and clueless and 'Veggie' was so possessive of his peasant. You're Corner rulez and so so you. You really should write a lot more. the only complaint i have is that you don't use Vejitto and Gogeta too much. There should definately be more of the two 'fusion-babies'. Maybe you should make them the centre characters of another story. i read you're story 'Timeskip' and after that i read every one you wrote. 'Make a wish' seems cool. Veggie should take the help of the fusions to drive Onna into the mad-house. Keep on writing and you're no.1!

E

It been a while...so i had to catch up on everything...im such a bum...
i just started college whic for some strange reason gives me more free time...
Cant wait for the rest...

Kurochan: Chuquita's # 1 Fan

How much more enjoyable the actual GT series would have been had Vegeta been included in Pan, Goku and Trunks' adventures. Giru was a hilarious blast in this chapter, and I continue to be entertained by how the various wishes have influenced the evil dragons. Our favorite Prince of all Hams, Vegeta, was also a scene-stealer with his antics.

*grins so widely it actually hurts her face* HA HA! this is GREAT!! i love it.
^_^
there's so much quotable stuff from here to amuse me...like "my pants are lonely." *grins more* that's a good one.
HA HA HA HAH AHHA! i can't wait til you update! see ya soon!

S. Tom: well vegeta getting possesed by that dragon is a whole lot worse then pan, but i really dislike that dragon.
C. Tom: yeah that dragon reminds us of captian ginyu and his body swap technique bad captian ginyu having to resort to switching so as to beat his opponent.
Me: another great chapter chu, sorry for the delay in reviewing for this chapter though. the only thing i dislike is kakarot and vegeta's relationship seems to be advancing to the point where i'd hate to read them together but since your stories are so funny and whatnot i wouldn't be able to stop reading. i can't wait to see what the other dragons look like, later gotta go

Jenna: Hi Chu, that's horrible about four of your fics being attacked.)

Hiei: ( You should beat them up!)

Grub: ( That's not a soultion Hiei, Chu has the right idea by talking to the attacker.)

Vash: ( I agree.)

Hiei: ( So is that how you fight miss saiyan by talking.)

Grub: ( no this is.)
[Grub hits Hiei lightly]

Hiei: ( you done it now nigen.)

Jenna: ( BREAK IT UP!)
[Vash graps Hiei's shirt and Jenna picks up Grub]

Vash: (At least their little Jen.)

Jenna: ( Yeah, but grub's just five so she's still growing.)
[Jenna put's grub back on the ground]

Hiei: (TRASH PUT ME DOWN!)
[Vash let's Hiei go and hiei lands on his butt]

Hiei: ( I hate you Trash.)

Jenna and Grub laughing at Hiei and Vash

Jenna: (Sorry Chu, for the short review put i have to find a sceenshot of frezia for a pic i'm drawing.)

Grub:( Your just wanting to play on your graphire you got for your birthday this weekend.)

Jenna: ( Yeah and i got to find that pic. oh yeah and write on my fic.)

Grub: (Bye Chu.)

Jenna: (Bye.)

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Ah, I understand that you don’t want to spoil a chapter! I can wait to see if my questions will be answered.

And loopholes are fun to play with! GT is an atrocity with its terrible ending (and corny dialogue and crappy hair and horrid clothes) so I’m glad you’re poking fun at it! Here’s another thing; is Veggie the Ou by now? If so, what is he doing on Earth? Maybe in the current plotline, Vegito and Gogeta take over the Ou-work, leaving Veggie to live out his days non-platonically and happily ever after with his peasant!

Brolly: You’re really shooting for non-platonicness, aren’t ya?

Yeah, well, of course! Duh! Veggie is clearly in love, if severely in denial. That is why it is up to the wiles of Turles to break through his justified-but-limiting fears.

(holds up sign saying ‘‘Raditz for Turles’ seme!’’)

I think they would make a fantastic couple and I don’t think Turles would mind being uke since he knows he’s an actual seme. Maybe Vegeta can come round to the same logic…

Gasp! Veggie’s been eaten by a dragonball! I love Kaka-anger and Kaka-innuendo. He’s so much fun to write! Yay! And Veggie defeated a dragon all by himself with Gohan’s glasses! Shame, it is traumatizing to grow so very old so quickly.

I made up two drinks this week for our Saiyans! I must thank you for the inspiration of the names. The ingredients are a secret though, thus making it my personal cocktail. One version is called ‘Pinktagious!’ Its full name is “The Pinktagious Horror of Ukedom” from Fic 100 (quote: Bejito) but I call it Pinktagious for short. Its non alcoholic, but the seme version is blue and it has al-co-hol aplenty for the semes amongst us!

(offers a glass to Brolly) And there you go! You get the Semelicious version!

(aside) I would give Veggie the Semelicious one, but he cannot tolerate alcohol. And Kakarot can have Pinktagious because it would make Veggie feel better and safer.

I hope that your transition to another college is easy and non-traumatic. I’m leaving home for varsity (its 8 hours away but its by the sea! Yay!) so it is kinda hard to change environments. How nice that you have snow! (pouts) There is no such thing here in Joburg. The only snow we get is on top of a random range of mountains. I have played in the snow in other countries but once at home.

Whatever happened to Kakarot’s diary? I haven’t seen it since Veggie picked it up in ‘Slushie’! It must be a rather lemon-scented work by now…

Well, I look forward to the peek at 100 years in the future. I like the mushy Kaka-version, but take the non-platonic and put it in the space ship and its FUN! Like the alternative future that terrifies ChiChi.

Must run and update my story, so here’s wishing you thousands of creativity bursts!
Best wishes upon (working) dragonballs,
Zo and Brolly

Allright! Yay! Part 2 is complete! That was good. Kept me *dramatic pause* "into it" for the whole story. Haha! Vegeta gets the best lines! "AND LOOK AT MY HAIR! ITS OBEYING THE LAWS OF GRAVITY!"
And...you did a cliffhanger again which is very understandable. I...AM...NOT...MAD. *lunges* LET ME A-...No I'm just kidding I'm not mad since it ended that way in the episode 53.
Goku is very mad right now! He will kick this dragon's butt! Save Veggie Goku!
Oh, yeah I like the part where Chi-chi keeps talking about how...huge...Goku's "winki" is. She just wanted to show off. Or show off Goku...the perve.
Well see ya some time next week!
It was great keep it up!
BYE!

NO VEGGIE! ;__; Gokus gonna kik some ** now! Go save ur Veggie Kaka-chan!

lolol my fave line... Goku-"Im never gonna get any".

Another great chapter Chu! =D

X3 Heehe~ This chapter was so much fun! I fell out of my metaphorical chair many a time, heh. Gasp, another cliffhanger! Poor Veggie -- but even poorER Goku! O_O
Can't wait to read what happens next~ :D

Score! ^^ Radittsu and Turles are fun. -sighs- Any chance of figuring out their relationship?

Great chapter! I loved how Veggie was pointing out the plotholes; and the dragons were entertaining. This was such a fun chapter; I can't wait to find out what happens next !