I avoid slash like the plague,so I didn't think I would like this one (the description sounded a bit slash to me)what a hysterical riot! I can so see vala and cam giving daniel a hard time! great job

Oh I did get such a good chuckle out of that. I loved it. Keep up the great work!

ahahaha funny...

Okay that was funny! LOL I love it! I haven't had a good laugh in a while...that really did the trick! Great job HB!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

I like your ending especially.

"Oh shut up..."

*giggle*

It was awesome. Short and sweet ;-)

--DelvianPriestess9

Hahaha...hehehe...haha... Okay, next time warn me when it's going to be so darn funny so I don't read it while I'm pretending to get a lot of work done... Geez, you can explain away the occasional giggle while "working" but the dialogue was way too funny for a little giggle.

Excellent job! This is a perfect example of why I can't resist your Daniel/Vala fics.

That was funny! You are so good at writing!!
“I don’t want you to- WHAT DID YOU SAY?” Halirous!!

That was really good !
Very realistic but funny too. I love this kind of "little story" and I must say that I'm jealous of your sense of humor...
Keep writing like this, we need Vala/Daniel (especially me in fact...lol)

Oh, my gosh, that made me laugh so hard... I love the way they pushed Daniel's buttons like that! So funny... And I'm now adding the story to the Daniel/Vala C2.

OMG too funny! You seem to have captured that certain something that Daniel and Vala have; a sort of snarky, combative relationship that I love watching on the show. And Mitchell's voice is realistic too. I could actually see them saying these things, which something authors often have trouble with. I REALLY hope you plan on writing more.

Oh this was good. Will there be more?

Becca

LOL absolutely perfect characterisation and really very very funny...loved the reference to the SGC Gene pool, and after seeing the latest episode of SG1 I'm saying Vala's on to something...you could cut the sexual tension between Cam and Danny with a knife (hehehe)

That was pretty funny! You captured the esence of Vala spot on! Bravo!

(Laughs) This had me cracking up the entire time i was reading it! You are so clever and really know how to write Vala and Daniel!! I love it! I love all your stories, oh i hope you keep up the Vala/Daniel stories! Eei! :)