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JennCorinthos 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseI have a dirty mind so I do know what Danny and LIndsay are doing... Love this series... JENNIFER
xxBuffyfreakxx 2007-03-02 ch 1,	abusehehe great ending!
Moriel21 2006-05-25 ch 1,	abuseLol, loved all three of these Affected stories! They're fabulous...funny, cute and HOT!! You're just fabulous...so far I haven't read a story of yours that I haven't liked, lol! Keep up the fab work!
Remote Control Princess 2006-03-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is not good... I now have 'gutter'ly DLR thoughts? Where did they come from?! Gr...but brilliant chapter! I love how forawrd she is, but still sweet and innocent lol Becs x
missusmesser 2006-02-19 ch 1,	abuseI loved every. single. last. bit...:D cant wait for more
KatKnits00 2006-01-12 ch 1,	abuseLoved it and for a shower with Danny.
dannylover934 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abuseThat was great! And I can't definetly fill in the blanks!
A.Boleyn 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abuseBest line: "But I could be persuaded to purr". LMAO SUPERB!
Tigerlily06 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abuseThanks for the image... Gonna be smiling all day...
BabyD-MontanaGirl 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abuseOMFG! I LOVED IT! WHOOT WHOOT! Go Dream! Hehehe...I thought it was awesome. Who ever thought Chinese food could be erotic? Not me, but you have definately changed my view on it. Yep, I'll never look at it the same way. The last line is my fav besides when she kicked his *. I'm sitting here just imagining him growling and it's giving me goosebumps. shivers* Whoa. This was great D. Seriously.
CoffeePleaze 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abuseNice!! Lol, love the banter between the two of them. The ending was great too. You are definitly one of my favourite fanfic writers! Can't wait for your next fic :D
Dingbat142001 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abuseOMG Fantastic! I really loved this. Sweet and hot at once. Awesome! Constant flirting is awesome. Fav line: 1)...placing his thumbs threw the belt loops of her jeans letting his hands rest on the top of her **... 2)“Damn Montana.” He growled picking her up. 3)“Nope, but I could be persuaded to purr,”
jolein 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abuseThanks,now my mind is working in overdrive(with should be a good thing since I still need to finsh something,lol) Anyways,as always I loved this and the way you let them banter is a nice one. I like it that Lindsay makes the move on him;) and the part with the drawing is so cute ,something I could see happening with Danny. Hugs jolein
mestiza 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abuseThis is a wonderful third part. Well written as always and I enjoyed it from the beginning til the very last word. And may I add that the lines are fantastic. You're genius ;) The part where Danny almost hit the ground was hilarious. Lindsay is pretty good in kicking asses huh?! And how funny is Flack? Let them search for the bullet twenty minutes... lol!! I LOVE him for doing that! I like Casanova's lines like “Well Casa De Messer has both food and showers on the menu.” ... That's definitely what I wanted to read or even better would want to hear with his sexy voice. ya know what I mean! sigh A girl can DREAM. This could be your sloganizer btw. And how hot is that line “My powers of persuasion are overwhelming.”?! Would he say that to me you can be sure that I will hit the ground cause of fainting. OK, now from hot to aw... how cute!! And I mean the kid's drawing. That's such a sweet side note. And he even kept it. Hugs Danny :) hehehe... now the last part. Much left to the imagination but ya already know that mine is pretty active ;). Actually I really like that about your stories. Very good idea to let them first get all dirty with food and sauce... which of course MUST lead to the shower. “You said something about this restaurant having a shower?” ... “You made me dirty, I think it’s best of you clean me up.” lol that's awesome! Very good job! And the gush is still alive. lol
Elainhe 2006-01-10 ch 1,	abuseI shouldn't read fanfiction before starting work in the morning. ;) This one is going to be with me for the rest of the day! I loved it from the fisrt paragraph to the last; a stunning conclusion (if it is?) to this series. I wondered what you would name number 3 - 'Affect This': perfect. Great writing, great scenes, great dialogue.

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