crepy...
he's such a stalker

The end was really... WTF?
And now I can't stop laughing because Orochimaru cleaned Ankos flat while wearing a pink apron... *drop*

O.O
OROCHIMARU?
WHAT?
Amazing story, apart from that. I'm gonna have to re-read it now knowing that.

I just realised you didn't say Iruka oncn in the story O_o. After reading it again xD

OH MY GOD! That was...kinda creepy. Very, very well written, but creepy. I usually don't like Iruka/Anko, but your ones work for me. And orochimaru is really, really really creepy.

Wah, you really did cheat us out of an Iruka/Anko fic (though in that relationship, it's probably Anko/Iruka). But still... creepy. Orochimaru putting on a pink apron is... ah.

That was awesome! The ending was quite the twist, I must tell you. This is so going into my faves. ^_^

O.O Oh WOW! You know, as I was reading, i just knew FOR SURE that it was Iruka who was cleaning Anko's arpartment, but WOW! What a twist! I'm sure that's what you were aiming for to begin with but I had to read the story twice just to be sure it wasn't Iruka! And I just realized that not once was it mentioned exactly who it was who cleaned the apartment until the very end. Wow. I applaud your skill at decieve and misleading. It was amazing XDD You're amazing!

ToriMiu
My heart belongs to Kakashi. And he belongs to MEXDD

why would orochimaru have a picture of anko and iruka

I think that was the most surprising thing I have ever read. But I liked it, kudos to you!

First, I think it's Iruka, just because. Then, I think it's an older Naruto because who else would have enough chakra that he would create more than one kage bunshin just for cleaning? But OROCHIMARU? This Requires a second chapter! Note the capital 'R'!

I really liked this, but the ending kinda confused me. Does Orochimaru have the other picture? Or did Orochimaru suddenly appear in her bedroom? Well, anyway... I thought this whole thing was really nice and well thought out. If anything, I like Iruka even more--though that could be because my apartment is currently in a state to rival Anko's, lol! You think you could convince him to come over and clean mine, too? ;-)

update!

Wow i know im super late here with the review but i just read it and dude i like literally gasped like out loud!

Awesomeness

Nifty. And... diffent... Very different...

Also, to reply to your review -

I actually used to write like you, but I had changed the way I wrote my stories for Heavenly Hell and Lord of Thunder (A story under my penname there, also Ueki Kazumi).

And also, just for the comment that made me chuckle -- I recently got a beta out of my friend, who is ADD and loves the evil PPGs.

I just thought that was ironic and funny all at once.

Very nifty one-shot. Loved it.

- Ueki Kazumi