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| angel61991 2008-07-01 ch 8,  | abuseinteresting please update soon. |
| Tai Khan 2007-05-10 ch 8, | abuseOverall...interesting, at least. Unfortunately, Ranma's character seems to be an Inuyasha clone, rather than Ranma 'sharing' space with Inuyasha. |
| Princess Asuna 2007-04-27 ch 8, | abuseWow intresting story so far cant wait for yoou to update keep up the good work ^_^ |
| JhyarelleDrakon 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abusetag |
| Kitsune6 2007-02-26 ch 8, | abuseHehe, nice. I'm really hating Akane now, that that I need much help. The R/N stuff was great. More fluff please, it's better than the 'real' plot. This is on my alert list. Keep up the great work. =) |
| whimsy007 2007-02-15 ch 8, | abuseI agree with the reviewer 'author'. Even for the Ranmaverse it seems implausible that people can be married without their consent regardless of still being minors. There is no indication in the manga or even the anime that the fathers have any such legal power. They can probably block a marriage where one or both of the couple are still underage, but they can't force one. I don't know where you are taking the story, but marrying Ranma and Nabiki this way would be using a deus ex machina which is generally something to be avoided. Borrowing an idea from "Dragon's Destiny" by John Tannius, have Nabiki threaten Akane with getting her married to Kuno if she keeps interfering. Would there be anything more frightening to Akane? Because your writing skills are improving, consider rewriting and reposting earlier chapters. |
| author 2007-02-14 ch 8, anon. | abuseOk what you did at the end was WRONG! Even in Japanese society, they have to have proof that there was even anything sexual going on between two people before they can be forced to be married. Another thing is that, even if there is something sexual going on between two people, the parents CAN'T force two people to marry. Just because they are the parents doesn't mean that they can use the law to their advantage. Honor or not, the two people getting married HAVE to consent to the marriage as well. Doesn't matter what you think people might say in the fic in regards to the Tendo's and Saotome's. The law is still there. |
| Opt1mus 2007-02-08 ch 8, | abuseI want more soon, this is the best inuranma xover I have ever read |
| ranma girl 14 2007-02-07 ch 8, | abusewhat will Akane do after she finds out what happened? plz plz plz update soon ^_^ |
| Dan 2007-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood god, this is absolute drivel! Mindless repetition, lackluster, two-dimensional characterizations of the Ranma/Inuyasha case, unexplained connections...even the grammar and spelling is atrocious! Please, for the love of God - either cease and desist or enroll yourself in a couple of intensive English classes! |
| Innortal 2007-02-07 ch 8, | abuseDamn, weird. But your writing style has improved by leaps and bounds. |
| Dumbledork 2007-02-06 ch 8, | abuseHehehe, that's a good one. Ranma and Nabiki married. Can't wait to see Akane's reaction. And Furinkan will probably be in an uproar. |
| Materia-Blade 2006-10-19 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh... damn it's the end. Well. Bad grammer and sometime even spelling. A few errors in correct word Usage. But none of that holds a candle next to this. "I seen." GOD I HATE THAT! It's "I saw" Damnit! Otherwise great fic. |
| Headless-Whore 2006-10-19 ch 7, | abusehahaha cool fic |
| author 2006-10-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseYou have resubmitted this chapter more times than I care to count. When will you actually put up a new chapter? |